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Azriel wrote:
Isn't 50 words a bit short 
For a poem? I wouldn't say so. Anyway, it's the minimum.
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Yes guys I know it's the minimum but like 
Allie
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But.. I'm not comfortable posting it here so i think i'll skip. 
Good luck everyone!
WRENCH
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I shall try 
Baileyyrosee
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Azriel wrote:
Yes guys I know it's the minimum but like 
i’m just making it that since you can enter a poem. 
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idk if i should try or not, was a long time ago since i wrote something uh
Lanesse
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I will try! 
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Shellybelly wrote:
idk if i should try or not, was a long time ago since i wrote something uh
doesn't hurt to try ! 
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Maybe I will try a poem 
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Limited wrote:
btw should we post it here or where?
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The Poem Of Heart :

Every little tentacles has a little heart

And its from here Im gonna start

I'll sing a song that will drive you crazy

While around your boat is all hazy

 
I will steal you heart when you will drown 
And I will laugh like a crazy clown

Please Im asking to stop to bawl
Its not so bad after all !

Now you belong to me
And I will never let you free




Cindy
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OMG i love that set!

But my english is so bad haha, but i check what i can do.
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The story about Shellina

The story is about a beautiful sea creature called Shellina, who was known for her beauty and obsession with seashells. That is why she got the name, Shellina. Every morning when the sun began to rise, Shellina went out for her daily seashell collocation where she found all sorts of seashells.
One morning, when Shellina was on her daily seashell collection, she found what she thought must be the most beautiful seashell she had ever seen, so she decided to take it with her and add it to her collection. But later that night, when she was about to fall asleep, she heard a voice calling her name. She quickly realized it came from the seashell she had just found and carefully picked it up. She then answered back to the voice, calling her name. The voice belonged to a young female human called Maria, who had heard stories about Shellina. The stories said that if your heart is pure you have the chance to talk with her through a special seashell, but only at night. Shellina, who was a naive sea creature, believed in what Maria told her and as time passed by they soon become close friends. Every night Shellina and Maria talked about everything that had happened during the day, which later evolved into love. Shellina had never been this happy before, but the fact that she was a sea creature and Maria was a human made her sad and she really wished that she could become a human. One night, Maria told Shellina something that made her blood froze. Maria's father, who didn't like that Maria always was in her room, had decided to marry her away to a rich man. This meant that is was the end for Maria and Shellina's love. Shellina managed to convince Maria not to marry this man, and together they made up a plan on how Maria could escape her family and the man she didn't want to marry. But they never got the chance to begin their plan because Maria's father had secretly been hearing everything they said. He destroyed the seashell Maria was using before everything became silence. Shellina's heart broke into millions of pieces and she was never happy after that day. The story has it, that to this day Shellina is still looking for a seashell that can reunite her and Maria again. Even if Shellina deep down knows that Maria might be married to the man, she refuses to lose hope. And if you listen carefully during the night, you can hear her crying while looking for a seashell that will bring her love back to her again.
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She Calls To Me

She is a Goddess born of the sea.

Like Aphrodite before her, she calls to me, and I am enraptured. I do not know whether she is real or my imagination praying for the release of this prison I must call home, where I must cater to a false love of a man I had never know. But her voice…. Her voice it sings to me at night.

It brings me dreams.

They feel like another life. I am free from the hell on earth, and my legs are like hers; made for the water and for the sea. No more homely comments, or that I’m perfect for a purpose. I am like her and I am free.

I sing to her one night.

I sit and I sing, and my voice isn’t as strong or as beautiful, but I sing for her. And she sings back, continuing the old hymn perfectly and I almost sob. We continue for what feels only like moment, but the sun begins to rise and I know we both must rest.

I dream again.

And again… And again. I sing and dream and I am so close to her that I could feel her hand against mine. And finally, I devise that it’s time. I take only objects I deem the most necessary. A necklace, small baubles, a small pouch to carry them in.

Offerings to my goddess.

I leave just before dusk, so I could reach her as night settled. And I sang, trying to pinpoint her, trying to find her source. I had to find her. And I did. She rose from the sea and she was even more perfect than I’d imagined. She was delicate and pink and so ethereal as she rose from the waters below, so beautiful and decorated with shells.

I sang with love in my heart. And she smiled.

A hand outstretched to me, and I took it. I took it and before I knew it she had me in her grasp and we were underwater. And I was free. We were free together, as the light faded away and she dragged me under.

She was my Goddess, and I was hers.
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