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you defo made progress in such a short time wow! and i think you have a really nice voice, fit for musicals and such
if i could give som advice i would mention you should work on voice control, like try singing on the line with the melody if that makes sense? you're a little off on that spot, but for some people that ain't as easy. on the part where it goes "You wouldn't know me at all" you're tone doesn't change, which makes it sound a bit off.
but overall, WOW