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I’m human
Raphaelx
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Raphaelx wrote:
Some lyrics i wrote x

<intro>
Don’t be a little liar

<chorus 1>
Why is it so hard to breath
When I cut myself, I bleed
Used my pain like it was weed
Treated and devoured me as a piece of meat

Please my love don’t unseen
We both know its you and not me
F**k me over till its over
But the world is gonna see

<verse 1>
I’m human
I’ve skin
Have electric 
Living soul 

I’m human 
I’ve rights
Flowing blood
Living heart

<chorus 2>
Why is it so hard to be free
You will cut my bones/wings, I bleed
My blood is all you will see
Thinking it was eating soft ice cream

Please my love don’t unseen
We both know its you and not me
F**k me over till its over
But the world is gonna see

<verse 2>
I’m strong
I’ve bones
Having power
Living-ing

I’m strong
I’ve me
Being free
Living-ing

<bridge>
liar
wild fire
cryer
never ceasefire

<verse 3>
I’m strong
I’ve wings
Have electric
Living soul

I’m human
I’ve me
Being free
Living soul

<outro>
The whole court know 
(baby don’t you go?)
I was your living desire
Baby set me on fire

don’t be a little liar
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Date: 22-08-2019 23:12 | Times changed: 2
Private
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Chlorine wrote:
Looks good ^^
If u record an demo vocal it would be fun to try make a melody hahah 
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Date: 22-08-2019 23:16
Raphaelx
Youtube Star



Raphaelx wrote:
Chlorine wrote:
Looks good ^^
If u record an demo vocal it would be fun to try make a melody hahah 
Thank you, I will💗
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Date: 23-08-2019 08:52
GenderTeam
World Famous



GenderTeam wrote:
it looks great but can you add the word ”got” after the word ”i’ve” because i don’t think i’ve skin is correct grammar !’ i might be wrong tho
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Date: 23-08-2019 09:55
Raphaelx
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Raphaelx wrote:
intimate wrote:
it looks great but can you add the word ”got” after the word ”i’ve” because i don’t think i’ve skin is correct grammar !’ i might be wrong tho
Hmmm I don’t know exactly, English isn’t my mother language haha
thank you🌸
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Date: 23-08-2019 12:55
Klavier
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Klavier wrote:
intimate wrote:
it looks great but can you add the word ”got” after the word ”i’ve” because i don’t think i’ve skin is correct grammar !’ i might be wrong tho
no ur right it sounds kinda weird
either say "i've got" or "i have"
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Date: 23-08-2019 12:58
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