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Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
My friend is returning from Ireland over the holidays

I'm excited to see her again, even if it's just for a day
Ooh exciting!

I miss my rl friends
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Smile2 wrote:
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Ask ask ask u know what?
no
First ask what?
U ruin the script
Lol
i dont follow the script, if u wanna tell something just tell
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Ugh, there is a sentence I don't know how to write.
It's in an english assignment, idk if you guys might be able to help me?


The way Freeman makes fun of the journalists andwriters, who have written articles and essays about moving out of London, is through humor. The way she words her sentences doesn’t make what she says to seem like a critique, yet there are elements of it. She does that through irony.

“I started to look around and I realised, you know what?London really is dead. You can go for months in the city without seeing anyone other than a Russian billionaire or Charles Saatchi.” (P. 2, L. 24-26)

The irony is seen when she states that London is dead, thereby boring,however she decides to mention some interesting people, that most ordinary people would be excited to see in the streets of London. In that way her statement is being opposed by the possibility of meeting them.
     Despite of the critique of thestatement, she doesn’t distance herself to the thought of leaving London. (Insert missing sentence)

“So as soon as I realised this was a thing – journalistswriting about how they have decided to move to such exotic and bucolic (…) places where they famously give away five-storey houses in exchange for a bucket of apples and a pint of ale (…) I knew I had to get on board at once.” (P. 2, L. 19-23)


I need to connect the last bit of text to the quote in some way. I don't know. I thought about emphasizing the exotic factor which supposedly could be more interesting than London, but I don't know how to put it ):
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Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
My friend is returning from Ireland over the holidays

I'm excited to see her again, even if it's just for a day
Ooh exciting!

I miss my rl friends
Awe
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Shouldn't I have brought my assignment to you? Did I kill you by doing so?
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I can't remember if I took my meds or not
oh oh
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Aphelion wrote:
I can't remember if I took my meds or not
oh oh
Uhoh
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Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
I can't remember if I took my meds or not
oh oh
Uhoh

If I tell anyone my legs feel weird tomorrow I probably didn't take them
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Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
I can't remember if I took my meds or not
oh oh
Uhoh

If I tell anyone my legs feel weird tomorrow I probably didn't take them
What are the meds for?
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Rouya's thread reminded me that I have to do smth with my hair again soon.


Also I'm working on that annoying sentence, I've got I think three words for it.
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Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
Uhoh

If I tell anyone my legs feel weird tomorrow I probably didn't take them
What are the meds for?

just for keeping my blood levels even but man I depend on them
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Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:

If I tell anyone my legs feel weird tomorrow I probably didn't take them
What are the meds for?

just for keeping my blood levels even but man I depend on them
Oh I see. I hope you remembered them then
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Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
What are the meds for?

just for keeping my blood levels even but man I depend on them
Oh I see. I hope you remembered them then

same
I probably did tho
I just never remember lol
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Aphelion wrote:
Alfie wrote:
Aphelion wrote:

just for keeping my blood levels even but man I depend on them
Oh I see. I hope you remembered them then

same
I probably did tho
I just never remember lol
AHah, oops
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I'm always about to make comments in my assignment, but have to delete them because I'm not sure if I can do that?

Here's the sentence I made:

She emphasizes the exotic and bucolic places, where it’s often seen thatthe journalists and writers moved to. Even better, it sounds to be cheap there.


Do you think the comment from me is alright? (The even better part)
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