Kieren wrote:Photosynthesis wrote:Kieren wrote:
Tbh I'm pretty bored of this.
Might've been exciting for like, one day.
Im sorry you feel that way, but may I remind you they're new to this and are still learning, so to them this is exciting.
I think they'd appreciate constructive criticism more, so they will know for next time
It's fun for maybe two days, having an event where it's dragged out and basically no info is being given, isn't very fun to me.
I can tell others are bored too because at the start there were a lot more posts being made throughout the day, now there's just a couple replies each day, mostly from supportive friends.
My tip for next time maybe, maybe include more info instead of a slowly de-blurring picture. And only drag it out for two days, maybe three tops.
No one on vp likes waiting for anything.
I'm pretty patient, but this has honestly lost my attention.
A little more backstory development would have been great and more exciting rather than " the ghosts are gonna kill us if we tell you", now there aren't even ghosts, it's suddenly the godfather??? (The storyline made seems inconsistent since y'all just went from ghosts to godfather)
I think what would be more exciting is, if the godfather that's been brought up out of nowhere (and the ghosts are gone?? Since it's suddenly the godfather today and no further mention of ghosts) Had taken a group member hostage for trying to give more details than they should and you can't tell any more secrets or details or another member would be taken or something like that. And only godfather approved hint would be given, and maybe another group member gives a secret detail so they too get dragged off as a hostage too. (Hostages wouldn't be able to post in the threads because well, they'd be taken hostage lol)
Or if maybe the ghosts had been people the godfather killed and they were properly introduced like "I'm Andy white, I was killed by the godfather because I stole his money, here's a hint for today xxxxxxx"
I'm just throwing ideas at this point.
Because the inconsistency of the story is kindof off putting.
Thank you for your feedback love! We will take them into consideration for the next time c: