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Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
I felt the two voices, forces within my body, tear each other to shreds, my own soul suffering as well. I doubled over and fell into the water. I screamed, clawing at my scalp, trying to make it all stop. I was running out of air, so I shut my mouth and held what could be my last breathe safe inside myself.
(evanescence reference there XD)
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Date: 29-11-2013 02:08
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
(As I was reading I was like "OMG is she refering this to Evanescene" and then I read what you said and was like O.o "Did she read my mind?")

"Eve!" I yelled as I felt another spirit try and consume me.I broke from being motionless I ran to her but stopped midway knowing I might disturb another soul.So I edged toward her,making sure that every movement I made didn't disturb anything.
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Date: 29-11-2013 03:21
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
(hahaha xp)

I squeezed my eyes shut and told myself to calm down. I tried my best to concentrate on the voices. Go deeper into the water. Stop! Get out of her! Eve, you can trust me... Eve, I'm begging you, don't listen! I opened my eyes and looked up, realized I was completely immobilized by my fear. My fingernails dug in deeper as I felt excruciating pains shoot through my being, their war killing me from the inside.

(did you catch that one?)
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Date: 29-11-2013 05:34
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
(Still thinking have to read over it again lol I read over a few parts in the first one you tried to hint to me)

As I edged voices filled me.I felt my body go numb as I hit the ground.But it wasn't a different voice.It was the girl.Let her be,she'll be able to fight them off.I know she can.Her voice sounded sweet,soft,and innocent.So I stopped fighting and lied motionless.
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Date: 29-11-2013 05:45
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
(It was more subtle... immobilized by my fear [and soon to be blinded by tears i can stop the pain if i will it all away])

I gasped for air, only to inhale a bunch of water. I grabbed my neck now and began coughing. Evelynn, if you can hear me, you have to get up. I died so you could live, don't let that be in vain. I couldn't think of who it could be, but knew it didn't matter. I felt a slight surge of strength enter me and I forced myself to get up and crawl to the surface, finally reaching the shore and collapsing. I sputtered out some water and moved my legs out of the water. As soon as I did, the voices stopped, and I was left coughing the water out of my lungs on the shore.

(that was kinda cr@ppy b/c i couldnt get the wording right, but you get the idea)
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Date: 29-11-2013 05:57
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
(btw, I like this rp, it's getting interesting.)
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:00
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
(Oh now I see.Not really it wasn't that [email protected]'s still eye catching and yea this is interesting.)

I felt the girl leave my body as I regained motion.I got up and brushed myself off,but I then started to cough up blood,and as I did flashbacks shot through my mind like bullets making my mind hallow as my emotions began to kick in.I felt a tired slide down my cheek as I coughed up blood,being reminded of the day I murdered my mother and sister."C'mon let's get out of here.." I said as I stopped coughing up blood.

(I had an idea and I think it failed to what I want it to lead too... ;-; I hope not)
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:11
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
(well wut was the idea maybe i can help get back on track :3)

I coughed one last time then sat up, wiping my face. "Okay..." stood up, then stopped short when I noticed something in the water. My reflection. I couldn't tell, but did it just smile at me? I wasn't smiling. I looked at it funny before turning my attention back to Suki. "God, are you okay? This keeps happening..." I trailed off.
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:18
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
(Read it over it actually is xD.)

I quickly wiped the tear off my cheek as I heard her voice."Yea,I'll be fine let's just keep moving...away from the water..." I said as I grit my teeth together.Picking up my board and walking around the lake."God damn f---ing lakes..." I muttered in an angered tone.
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:24
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
(XP)

I looked at her and decided it was best not to argue. I grabbed my bag and followed her, stifling a few residual coughs. 
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:34
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
I plucked the first blue flower I saw and put it in my hair.I once heard they keep you clam,but didn't really agree with the idea so I had to try it.As we made it farther from the lake I could feel myself actually getting sleepier.I yawned,"Let's keep going we're almost to the right desitnat-" I passed out.Not feeling a thing as I feel forward.
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:40
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
I stared at Suki's body, horrified. "Suki..." I walked up to her and went to shake her shoulder. I felt a flash of someone else's memory flash through me, but because it was gone as soon as I realized what had happened, I couldn't tell if it was hers. I shook her shoulder again and flipped her over so I could see her face. I checked her pulse in her neck. It was there. I saw her chest rise up and down. She was breathing.
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:45
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
Once again  I was getting  another flash back.Of how I tried to hide my sister's body,Blood and sweat running down my body as I ran, and last but not least going to jail.I shot up as I panted waking up from the flash back and yanking out the flower.I looked at Eve,"Don't mind me,i-it happens.A lot.Yea," I said hoping she wouldn't notice my sarcastic tone.
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Date: 29-11-2013 06:53 | Times changed: 1
Lacrimosa
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Lacrimosa wrote:
I raised an eyebrow at her, but just shook it off. "Um, alright, uh... Here." I gave her a hand and helped her back to her feet. I could tell that she was obviously shaken and wondered what exactly 'happened.' "So.... where are we goin anyways?" I asked.
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Date: 29-11-2013 07:04
TheEnchantress
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TheEnchantress wrote:
"A store away from this dump," I said as I kicked a rock.I then smirked,"We're getting prepared for Jesse's party."
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Date: 29-11-2013 07:11
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