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Alice in the Asylum. (S)
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Prologue.
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Alice was sitting in her cell, tears freely running down her cheeks. She didn't bother wiping them away, she didn't want to. 

She wouldn't normally cry, crying was a sign of weakness, and she would never show how weak she really was. But she had been, she had been crying all day for no reason whatsoever. 

"Number sixty-five next." someone said outside of her cell. She wiped her eyes with her tiny pale hands. Nobody would know that she was turning seventeen soon, she looked around twelve. Skinny frame, hollow glassy blue, almost grey eyes, long blonde hair, white skin and to top all that off she wore a young girl's dress as well, it was the only dress that they could find to fit her. They wanted her to look presentable of course, yet they starved her. 

"Oh, the little dear has been crying." the man laughed a bit as he put a tray of brown slush in front of her, she grimaced but ate it eagerly anyway. 

They took the tray away and locked the door once she was finished. She curled up into a little ball again and let the tears run out of her eyes, she missed her old life. She could barely remember what it was like, they tried their best to make the patients forget about the life they had before. 

"N-no no, don't cry! Crying won't do any good!" someone said. 

"Not the voices..." she whispered, tears still rolling down her cheeks. 

"I'm not a voice, well, I am a voice, but I'm not in your head." the small voice laughed nervously. 

Alice looked up and let a small scream come out of her mouth.

"You're a rabbit." she furrowed her eyebrows. "A talking rabbit..." 

"No shit." the rabbit replied. 

"Oh, oh no, I'm getting worse." she said. 

"Alice, I'm here to take you to wonderland." 
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Genesis wrote:
aw alice in wonderland
but in a mental hospital
that's interesting
OK GO 
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Jasmine wrote:
Thanks guys c:
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interesting
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Jasmine wrote:
Thank you guys! I'll post more in a bit, I've got to do some chores. :/
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Jasmine wrote:
Chapter one - Discovering Wonderland.

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Alice sighed a little, turning away from the tiny animal.

"I'm Peter." the little white rabbit said, holding out a fluffy paw, Alice slowly held a finger out and shook his paw. 

"I'm Alice." she said quietly, her voice barely above a whisper. "Peter is a very strange name for a rabbit." the rabbit shuffled around a bit. 

"Well, you see, I'm not really a rabbit, I was a human, but the Queen imprisoned me, she turned me into a rabbit." the rabbit said quietly.

"You're lucky that you are a pretty rabbit, not one of those strange ones." Alice said, trying to point out the best in the current situation. 

"You see, Alice, Wonderland needs you, the red queen's power has grown too strong, she's lost her mind-" 

"A bit like me." Alice said sadly.

"She's killing innocent people. Wonderland isn't wonderland anymore, it's terrifying. You need to come with me." Peter the white rabbit told her, blinking his pinky red eyes a few times. 

"Okay." Alice said. "I'll go, but only because this is all in my head." 

"Follow me." the rabbit said, he got a little key out of his strange waistcoat and opened the cell door. Alice was overcome by a bright ray of sunshine that she hadn't seen in ages. 

"We must be quick." he said, running off around the corridor. Alice followed him, gripping at the hem of her blue dress. 

"HEY! Come back!" someone shouted. "Number sixty-five has escaped, we'll need some guards with weapons - it's a feisty one." she heard him murmur into his walkie-talkie. Alice was used to being labeled as a thing, everyone was, they gave them numbers and after that, their number was their name, that would be what everybody would call them. 

The rabbit came to a halt next to a hole in the ground, it seemed bottom-less. 

"Down here!" Peter squeaked. 

"Are you nuts?! We'll be ever so late!" Alice almost shouted, she heard footsteps, guards were comine. 

"No, but you would be, staying behind." the rabbit said.

"I'm already nuts." Alice said as she jumped down the hole with Peter the rabbit. 

It was a long way down, it seemed even more bottom-less than it was before, they fell down, swirling around for ages, she noticed little trinkets on the walls of the hole, and almost smiled at the picture of whom she assumed to be Peter but as a human, but she was falling too quickly to even think about smiling. 

Eventually they hit the ground with a thud.

Alice peeled herself up, groaning. She dusted herself off quickly. 

"Peter! You're back!" some man in a rather extravagant hat said, opening his arms to the little rabbit. "But I would prefer if you didn't dump poor Alice onto our tea party table! I'm ever so sorry for the rabbit's antics." the man with the hat said, smiling at Alice. Alice smiled back. 

"I'm Phillip, but everyone calls me Hatter." the man with the hat said, "Because that's what I am." he laughed a bit, holding his hand out, to get Alice off the table, Alice gingerly took it and jumped down. 

"I'm Alice." she said in the same tone that she did to the rabbit earlier.

"I know who you are." Hatter smiled, dropping her hand. "Cheshire Cat, please go and get Alice some suitable clothing." The Hatter said to a floating cat with a grin the size of his own face. Alice stared at it with utter disbelief. 

"Right away, Hatter." the cat said dreamily. 

"Welcome to wonderland, Alice." Hatter said, grabbing her hand and planting a featherlight kiss on it. 

But Alice would soon find out that nothing was really as good as it seemed.

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I had to keep the cat in there! ^_^
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Jasmine wrote:
Bump c:
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Taa guys c:
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Georgia wrote:
bump! Jas this is brilliant!
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Georgia wrote:
bump! Jas this is brilliant!
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Jasmine wrote:
Thank you, Georgia <3
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Bump.
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Jasmine wrote:
I'm posting more later.
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Jasmine wrote:
Alice's dress: http://www.polyvore.com/madness/set?id=78159416

Alice's more suitable clothing:  http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=78276329
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Chapter two - Nothing is easy.
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The Cheshire cat came back, a pile of clothes draped over his head for Alice. Hatter took them off of the grinning cat's head and handed them to Alice. 

"Be quick, we have to go in a bit." he told her, she nodded and vanished behind a tree to change. She felt lovely, she hadn't been able to wear comfortable clothes for ages. She stripped her dress and over-sized white worn out shoes off, leaving her pretty white head band on, despite it not really matching the clothes she was given. She pulled on a cream coloured blouse, dark brown tight trousers, a pair of nice brown boots, a karke loose coat and they had also given her a pretty green scarf with flowers on it and a satchel to keep things in, so she tied the scarf around her thin neck and hung the satchel over her left shoulder. 

She came out from behind the tree, her old clothes in her hands. Hatter took them from Alice and placed them on the table, he pressed a little button and they had disappeared, Alice smiled at this. 

"Alice," Hatter said, now holding something behind his back.

"Yes?" she asked. 

"This bow and arrow is for you, we were going to give you a sword and dagger as well, but someone lost them." he said, directing his gaze towards a sleeping doormouse, Alice laughed nervously. 

"Don't worry, I'm awful with weapons anyway." she said.

"Well, we'll have to train you up then, won't we? While someone gets you a new dagger and sword." he said through gritted teeth, frowning at the doormouse who woke up suddenly.

"Wha-what happened?" he asked, yawning.

"DO YOU WANT TO BE HUMAN AGAIN? IF YOU DO THEN YOU'D BETTER GO AND REPLACE ALICE'S OTHER WEAPONS." Hatter snapped at the poor doormouse. 

"Fine," he said, stretching. "Peter? Cheshire? Do you want to come?" he asked them, so they went off looking for Alice's new dagger and sword. 

Alice ended up sitting on a rock, cleaning off her bow and arrow while The Hatter was admiring his hat. Alice was wondering if she was getting worse, if she wasn't really in Wonderland and she was just in her ward, dreaming up fantasies and talking to herself. She must have been, that was the only logical explanation, but since when was anything logical? 

"Hatter?" Alice asked. 

"Mhhmm?" 

"Why me? Why couldn't some other girl get selected to kill the queen and save wonderland?" she asked, now picking up and arrow from the quiver and digging the blade of the arrow into her palm, trying to draw blood to see if she would wake up. 

"Because you are the only you!" he said, looking up at her to see what she was going. "No! Don't do that! Don't be so stupid." he said, running over and snatching the arrow from her hand. "Doesn't it hurt?" 

"Why would it? I'm dreaming." she said, picking another one up and slowly dragging it through her flesh. there was a numb sting but it wasn't really noticeable.

"No you're not, Alice. This is real." he told her. 

"You don't understand, I'm mad." she said. 

"So am I, and I know that this is real." 

"I'm just trying to think logically-" 

"Nothing is logical, Alice." 

That got her thinking...


"Hatter! Alice! We got the things!" came a few voices, Alice turned around to see three animals or people animals trying to carry a sword and a dagger. She rushed over and picked them up. 

"Thank you." she smiled, putting the sword into it's sheath and the dagger into her boot. 

"We need a war plan." Cheshire said.
 
But Alice wasn't even sure if she could possible help any of them.
 
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