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ET: Team Red Competition

Nateai
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Nateai wrote:

For a moment, everything was silent. The only sound that was heard was a nearby stream, and the whaipers of the wind that flew through the leaves above. He heard a snap from behind, and his body froze on spot. Icy fear dripped down his spine as he swallowed. Turning around, he could feel the hot breath of the beast tickle the skin on his face, as he gazed into its blood red eyes.

It slowly opened its eyes, slowly revealin it's pointy and yellow teeth. A horrible breath made its way it it he nose of the boy, slowly making him feel dizzy and feeling sleepy. His vision got blurry, and all he could hear was a quiet and high pitched laugh, before everything went black.

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Wow, this is really well done. Good job guys.

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DEITY wrote:

It was a dark December day...the day it happened. Me and my three friends, Laura, Eric and Kim were at my place, having nothing to do. So we decided to visit the old museum on our own risk, just for fun. It was the biggest mistake of my life.

Now we were outside the museum. You could smell the bad smell, even if you were 10 meters away from the building. It stinked from the rotten wood the museum was partly built of. Around the building it was a lot of warning signs that said don't ender. But Eric always wanted to be the cool guy who was brave and not afraid of anything, so ofcourse he was the first one to start walking on the stairs. Or well, the parts that were left of it.

Not long after we were all in the building. It took some time to get Kim to join us. But after a while, he was with us too. At that time we all thought he was a coward. But man, I really wish we were all like Kim.
The museum were full with crazy stuff. Eyes in bottles. Body parts in bottles. What kind of musem was this really?

For every step we took the floor made more and more funny sounds. Eric thought the sounds were so funny so he started to jump on the floor. Kim screamed at him not to do it. Because maybe the floor wasn't strong enough. Dumb as he was, he didn't listen. Laura encouraged Eric to not stop. And I just sighed, hoping they could stop being so childish. In not a suprise at all, the floor broke and everyone except me falled through the floor. They screamed, even Eric did.

I couldn't see them anymore. It was too dark down there. But I could still hear them. "Are you okay?" I asked. I could only hear crying and whispering from them, but after a while I got an answer. "No, I think Kim broke his leg." said Laura with shock in her voice. I didn't know if I was relieved or not for hearing that. This place creeped me out. Suddenly I saw a light down from the hole. Eric had his phone flashlight on. But in the same second I started to hear another kind of sound down from there. It sounded like a girl crying, but on the same time I heard a monster. I started to shake. "Wh-What is happening?" I whispered to myself.

And then I'm not sure what happened. I saw this doll like girl rip my friends apart. And then she ate them up. And I was just standing there. She even looked at me sometimes. But she didn't bother to do anything. I still wonder why every day. Was it because she enjoyed the fear in my eyes? Or was it because she couldn't come up here? I will never know. Because the day after when the police were searching through the museum, they didn't find any hole in the floor. And definetly not my friends either. I still ask myself. Did this really happen? Or am I the crazy one who killed them?

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DEITY wrote:
Sorry for posting the same post over and over and deleting it, the text was just so long it was easy to make mistakes.
And now I just realised my banner fits amazingly good to this! haha cx

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LavaEmerald wrote:

Waifu wrote:
Sorry for posting the same post over and over and deleting it, the text was just so long it was easy to make mistakes.
And now I just realised my banner fits amazingly good to this! haha cx

i'm just happy u found ur text, i wanted to cry for u when u said u lost it

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Horcrux wrote:

no need to be! I'm just glad you managed to get your text back! I was frantically going back on my history in hope it would pop up ^_^

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DEITY wrote:
♥♥♥♥
to both of you
i had another tab open where i could find it
so i got so so so relieved
cause if i wouldn't find it i would give up and not enter the competition sad

Beholder
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beholder wrote:
Akito has donated this jacket to the male prizes

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SLAUGHTER
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SLAUGHTER wrote:
The physical emotions stopped to occur just a few days after i found her. Although i could still hear her moans and devastated cries for help, banging on the inside of the head. Letting out horrified screams when she saw me feed. I may be a ruthless creature, but i don't lack real emotion. I felt compassion for her sometimes, for she had done nothing that made her worthy of this kind of punishment. In that moment, the weak, weak moment of god's filthy work, i made another cut in her cold, glowing arm. She felt every single centimeter of it, and her pain woke me up. Made me realise why I were there. She often tried to stop me from feeding, trying to befriend me so i would let her out. What she didn't know was that without me, she was just a rotten shell.

sorry for my poor english by the way :c

Ecstasy
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Ecstasy wrote:

I made my character's backstory a poem , if this is okay?Poems are kinda my thing.

Tainted and unholy , an abomination in the sunlight
Ebony mass swimming in monstrous gold , a horrifying sight
A traitor in each and every way my heart splinters
Staring at the inhumane shell where my other half once stood , now colder than the worst winters
Gasping for breath , but not at the merciless witches hand
But by my own stupidity and melancholy , to let such a beast walk the land
And worst of all , to let it penetrate my ranks , my heart , to become so dear to me
This creature that stands before me is a master of deception , that's all she'll ever be
But I can't shake this feeling that maybe there is a woman inside there screaming to be let loose
The same woman whom I shared all my fears with , and some of my best moments - not one that deserves to hang by a noose
So let the tedious purification begin
Cleanse her of all her nasty sin
As I clutch her face in my hands and I stab out the gold with a steaming poker
Laughing hysterically like a deranged joker
The purge is nearing an end , the holiness returning back to her
Satanic desire throbbing in the rivulets of crimson , streaming out of her sinful body , each unpure limb
I stare into the sightless craters upon her face where demonic forces once played
And smile because in those blind cavities there is more sense in her then the animal within forced to fade
Holding unabated breath for the end of all things
I watch as the lifeless corpse slumps into my waiting arms , her soul purer than a thousand gold rings
Stroking her breathless carcass with a lingering finger
I laugh and smirk as I am once again reunited with my true lover , her happiness still alinger
The purification a success
Her broken body more righteous than the entire process
Swathed in scarlet stippled sheets
I cocoon my dearest in the compassion for which my heart beats
Ba boom , ba boom , ba...Hark , what's this?
Should my ears deceive me not , that be the duet of two souls...One of which was sacrificed to the abyss
O unholy master of lustful sin , say it be false
That the mangled endeavors of my twisted beauty possess a pulse
The rise and fall of her heaving bosom may be my undoing
Dainty , telltale hands encircle my throat , lips are bluing!
Have mercy on me , haunted half
My intentions were only to cleanse you of Lucifer's laugh
Breath...Fleeing...Vision...Dimming...
My last sights be her alabaster face grinning
I plead you all , make not my mistake
To damage your purest when their heart be opaque
For not only did she take my life
But also let her lust for revenge possess her relentless spirit to stalk the night with a gleaming knife
So when the darkness suffocates your poor soul
And you set your sights upon her ravage face , upon which my poker took it's toll
I pray for you , o sweet child
Because those malice eyes are simply riled
With the uncontrollable desire to massacre all in her wake
And your life...She will take.

Ecstasy
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Ecstasy wrote:
I'm actually really pleased with my post um

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Horcrux wrote:
Poems are perfectly acceptable!! ^_^

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girlinthemirror wrote:

This is Angelia before she changed. This is when Angelia was an angel just like her name means. Angelia fell in love one day when a man named Damon. He was the guy every girl wanted to be with and Angelia was lucky enough to call Damon her man. Over time Angelia became obsessive with Damon. She watched his every move, listened to every conversation he had, she was always there. She became a stalker. It became so bad that Damon broke it offer with her. Angelia was torn and broken. She didn't know what she had done wrong, she was desperate to have Damon back, she was lost without him. One day she got the idea in her head, "If I can't have him, then no one can." And that was the day Angelia was no longer an angel.

This is Angelia, no longer an angel. She is a monster, a worker of satan, a person who you'll never look at the same. This monster she has becomes all because she was a crazy stalker lover. She stands here with her lovers skull in her hand. Remember the day she said, "If she can't have him, then no one can" Well she did it. She took that big knife in her hand and chopped up Damon. She mutilated his entire body except for his head. She kept his head as her prize. No matter where she goes, she keeps Damon's now decomposed skull with her wherever she goes.

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Selby wrote:

Yes that boy, he had an odd style. The wrongful thing to think of him was not that he was strange, rather that there were a fashion statement behind his eyes and a mouth under his mask.
Young Rasmus, the flesh he wears has begun to rot. He reeks of envy.
Rotten Rasmus, now you know what happens when you steal someone else’s skin.
I guess you'll have to find a new one.

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SLAUGHTER wrote:
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