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DaddyIssues wrote:
There are so many amazing texts o.o
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Date: 13-02-2019 05:27
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Claire wrote:
mine is haiku 
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Date: 13-02-2019 05:49
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Claire wrote:
she was so lonely

when he would go out to sea

the fisherman’s wife
 


without his embrace

so she swam deep down at sea

to find something warm



what she gave birth to

was not the fisherman’s child

not human not beast



the octopus girl

swims deep down under the sea

with pink tentacles
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Date: 13-02-2019 05:52
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Rochellette wrote:
°•♡•°THE LOST PRINCESS °•♡•°
By Rochellette
I used to be a lonely sea princess
My heart shell was an empty space
My pink scaly skin was so cold
Cold without love, without joy
The aquatic world orbited around me
But I didn't feel anything
Then I found you in the depth sea
You where a ray of sun underwater
My tentacles were so full of joy
So much to hug, so much to love
But my happiness didn't last long
The sadness in my eyes is new
The cold in my heart is an old friend
I lost my happiness when I lost you
Now I'm the lost princess 
Submerged in this dark sea
Trying to find you
You! My truly love
Will you find me?
Will you love me again?




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Date: 13-02-2019 06:33
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DaddyIssues wrote:
He walked among the folks that called him insane
Cause he was addicted to something stronger than what you put in your vein

He would glance over the water
And once again fall in love with the ocean's daughter

So when the navy looked for men of the blue
He signed up and got ready to join the crew

But on the ocean a storm came bad
And all the men on the ship went mad

He got pushed over the rail and into the cold
But even if he could not get up he felt quite gold

Cause at his feet was the reason for his heart to be bare
She held him down with her pearly eyes and flowy hair

He felt quite tall
Cause at the end of it all

He could not think of a better way to die
Then being drowned by the love of his life
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:05
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Nanami wrote:
I hate writing in ENGLISH. So nope. I hope someone selling it later.
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:08
Allie
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Allie wrote:
Is there any chance I could send it in somewhere? ;_;
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:14
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Libertas wrote:
The queen of the sea... That’s what she is most known as her father Poseidon had just stepped down as the king and now it was time for his daughter to rule the sea. The amount of plastic in the sea had growth and the fishes started to die...

It was a hard time to be the one in charge, no one knew how they would make the humans throw less plastic into the sea and the rulers of the world above the water didn’t seem to care that they killed the seas and all of us who lived in it.We had try to communicate with the humans by flushing up the plastic on their beaches but they didn’t seem to care...

The humans didn’t realize they needed us and the sea to stay alive, they were not only killing us, but they were also killing themselves. 

It needs to stop.
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:15 | Times changed: 1
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Nanami wrote:
September wrote:
Is there any chance I could send it in somewhere? ;_;
Haha yeah. That too. I don’t want someone else read it. xD
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:21
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September wrote:
Is there any chance I could send it in somewhere? ;_;
If that ever will be the case, then other participants should be allowed to do the same thing ; o I don’t think there should be made exceptions for only few participants and not the rest of them
Date: 13-02-2019 09:29
Allie
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Allie wrote:
Annihilation wrote:
September wrote:
Is there any chance I could send it in somewhere? ;_;
If that ever will be the case, then other participants should be allowed to do the same thing ; o I don’t think there should be made exceptions for only few participants and not the rest of them
Then can I have a suggestion for next comp? That everyone send in to the team account? :3 
SMT usually does that. But it's up to you. But we are some who aren't comfortable in grammar etc ^^
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Date: 13-02-2019 09:55
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PixSkata wrote:
I will tell the truth:
I'm not a faerie, neither an angel nor a witch.
I always felt the need for being special, I had such high hopes for myself.
I wanted so much more for me in life, to be more than just another girl.

Be careful what you wish for.
Because one day it just might turn out to be your new reality.
Every wish comes with a curse of some type.

All of my days.
All of my nights.
All of my life, it is like a broken record now.

The beautiful but melancholic Gloomy Sunday.
On repeat.
Over and over and over and over again, an infinite amounts of loops, truly a never ending tune.
Except there is no record player and I am broken too.
There is no music underwater.


It was one of the one most ordinary days,
I thought it was the time for my last mission in life.
My plan was to just let the ocean take me,
with the incredible force that we only see in nature.
One last message to the messed up world I was born in to.

I thought it would be the last day of my life, but my dream had been full filed.
But I wasn't dreaming anymore, more like a nightmare but I am awake.
Self hatred pierced through when I woke up, to my surprise,
I wasn’t dead? How?
I had became this creature, half human, half octopus.
First I was enraged and confused.
Tentacles instead of legs?

But I got my wish to come true, 
I’m representing more to the world than just another girl.
Not really the way I wanted it to be...
So much more to the world now so they caught me.

My new home is a water filled tank and a broken nonexistent music player.
They call it research, but in my eyes it more like torture.
They test my blood, collecting parts from my bone, but mostly just watching me.
I’m representing research, watched, like an animal.
Half animal, I'm just half a human.


I'll come back to haunt You. Because I no longer have freedom,
I can’t do the only thing I always had & still has on my mind.
The thought of letting the cold, dark water fill my lungs,


I will come back just to drown.
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Date: 13-02-2019 10:44
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Krystle wrote:

As she opened her eyes she found herself surrounded by water. Confused, not knowing how she got there she gasped for air and tried to push herself above the water but something was pulling her back down. Tired with the effort she decided to swim further down instead and find out what was holding her back.

As she reached the bottom of the ocean she saw something like never before. Some creatures that looked half human - half octopus with beautiful colored tentacles, from soft blues to deep purples and flowing hair, she was mesmerized by their beauty and found herself drowning into their deep eyes.

Snapping out of her trance she started speaking to them, trying to find out who they were, who she was and how she got there because she couldn't remember anything. They told her that she was in a shipwreck and had drowned; the ocean saved her and gave her a new life by making her a half human-half octopus creature like them. For the first time she looked down at herself, her light purple tentacles sparkled and her hair flowed out around her, she looked beautiful!

Filled with love for the ocean and grateful for her new life she swam into the tide ready to live forever among the seashells.
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Date: 13-02-2019 14:27
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PixSkata wrote:
PixSkata wrote:
My new home is a water filled tank and a broken nonexistent music player.

They call it research, but in my eyes it* more like torture.

They test my blood, collecting parts from my bone, but mostly just watching me.
I’m representing research, watched, like an animal.
Half animal, I'm just half a human.
* it's 
(not meant to say it, it's supposed to be it's)
sorry, long text & tiered brain, really put all of my heart & energy in my text
(reminder: 26)
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Date: 13-02-2019 15:10 | Times changed: 1
Allie
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Allie wrote:
I'm at the bottom. 
Everything is quiet, everything is dark. 
I can see the last breaths from myself in form of bubbles seep up towards the surface. I'm also surrounded by bubbles. Bubbles from all different sources.   

I feel heavy, but very weightless at the same time. Is that even possible? 
The bottom is covered in sea shells. In all kinds of colors and shapes. But don't step on them, it can break them and also cut your on their sharp sides.
My surrounding is blue. But mostly dark and also, it's endless.
The ocean is pretty, it's amazingly stunning. But it's also very mysterious, not trustable and evil.
People have drowned here. Lost their lives.
Is this really what the water is supposed to feels like? Or am i just trapped in my head, surrounded by thoughts and not bubbles?
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Date: 13-02-2019 16:15
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