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Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
now ı need the two remaining guests to send their final theories to me via pm

ı need every detail,all the relationships, who did what with who and what exactly happened to helen and how it happened
you again have 20 minutes

lets save helens soul everyone
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:29
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
@Krystle  @kidakakash 
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:29
Kidakakash
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kidakakash wrote:
Ups xD
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:35 | Times changed: 1
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
you needed to pm but whatever, ı guess you my dear guest are just so spooked by the ghosts that you want this over with
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:39
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
@Krystle 's theory
ok so helen is not the maid. the grandfather loves her and she just has to pretend to be the maid because of her race because the society wouldn't accept her relationship with the grandfather.

melanie is morgan and the grandfather's daughter and the man who wants to kill her is alfred argento in an effort to clear up the mess and hide the truth about melanie. eventually alfred tells helen about melanie though as was written in the letter found in the master bedroom.

now when helen was told about melanie she did not believe alfred and went to check on melanie herself in the attic. that's when melanie pushes her out of the window, however she does not die and instead morgan mellon kills her to get her out of the way so she can live happily with melanie and the grandfather.

annita and jason know about melanie but they only use it for their own benefit. jason helps annita find out the truth in the hope that the grandfather will lose his reputation in the business and he will get his job instead and when annita finds out about melanie she uses this to threaten the grandfather in order to get his money or property.
therefore annita or jason were not involved in any murders.
alfred wanted to kill melanie which is why the grandfather hid her in the attic.
and helen was killed by morgan mellon.
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:57
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
@kidakakash 's theory

Again, I do believe Helen was your grandfather’s maid, and that they had an affair, which they wanted to be kept private. Now your grandfather had Melanie with Morgan, Melanie was sick and was kept in the attic for some reason, she believed a bad man would come and kill her. That bad man I’m not sure who is, maybe it’s Kubrick who wanted to clean up the mess that was your grandfather’s life I don’t really know. Melanie said that they came into the attic, so there must have been two people present, one of them Helen which she pushed out the window.
Alfred said he did nothing to Helen other than to tell her the truth, the truth about that your grandfather had a kid who was sick and lived in the attic I assume. Because Helen asked questions and brought attention to this whole matter, Leigh saw her chance to blackmail your grandfather and expose his secrets. 

Now all in all this was a little confusing to me, maybe because I’m hunfove and it’s late, BUT I do think Melanie Killed Helen when Helen and someone else, I’m guessing maybe Kubrick went and looked in the attic. Then I think that your grandfather in fear of people to find out he has Melanie in the attic and that she killed Helen, he had to kill anyone associated with this whole event, which was Leigh, Morgan, Alfred and Kubrick. I still feel like I’m missinf a lot of pieces and that I can’t really put the puzzle together. But Melanie wasn’t killed, she died from her illness. 

Or maybe Melanie killed everyone herself because she’s a little demon spawn idk 
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Date: 05-08-2018 23:58
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
melanie looks at both theories with a sad expression...
so close she says,yet so far.
but it is enough to save me,to bring me redemption. thank you both.
thank you everyone who was with me tonight
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:00
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
and now everyone who has been with us all through the night,the actual story:
  charles was in love with helen. a feeling he thought himself incapable of. that is why he had alot of unapproved affairs,the most scandalous one being with morgan mellon,the daughter of the richest man in town. they had an child from the affair,melanie. since there was no way for morgan to take melanie as her own she left her with charles to either kill or gave up for adoption. the governor alfred thought the child deserved a chance at life while charles thought adoption was too risky and they should just kill her. so they both compramised and hide her in the attic for 8 years. charles told melanie there was a bad man that wanted to kill her to keep her in the aticc.

   annita was looking for a way to blackmail charles, so she went to kubrick for help. together they found the doctor that stayed in charles's manor for a week,with no one supposed to be sick inside. first annita thought this was sodomy,but when they got the doctor talking they learned it was something far bigger. something that could ruin charles forever. so annita wrote a letter for charles which charles buried under a tree.  

   meanwhile charles brought helen home to stay with him,and asked her to be his "maid" to not attract any attention. he asked helen to not go into the attic but helen was curious. but she was also loyal,so instead of going to the attic she started asking about it to anyone she knew. alfred knew if she were to asked the wrong person she could get them all into trouble. so alfred told her about melanie. than he wrote a letter to charles to tell him what happened. because helen was in such a weird mood that charles has started to suspect something was up.
     
  helen first didn't believe him,she needed to see for herself. if there was such a child,she would try to mother the poor soul,growing up in a tiny attic without love! only a private teacher to teach her stuff! to believe the story she needed evidence. so she wrote a letter to miss mellon,telling her she knew about melanie and she would be a great mother to her. miss melon was furious,there was no way a black woman could raise her child. so she not so politely asked helen to get her hands off her child. helen being upset but determined, decided to wait until everyone was asleep. she got some candy from the kitchen and climbed the attic. she was very carefull to not wake anyone up or scare melanie. she got into the attic and even tho she did expect an childs room she still fund it unbelievable. just when she was about to ask for melanie,someone pushed her from the window into her death. the last face she saw was the face of an 8 year old girl...

   when charles found helens body he went straight up to the attic to have melanie hug her and say "ı beat the bad man daddy ı am safe now!" charles hold her daughter,which he did loved dearly and started crying. he blamed annita and kubrick for trying to bring melanie to surface and ruin him,he blamed alfred for telling helen about melanie,he blamed morgan for being such a bitch to helen and a bad mom to melanie. so he invited them all to the manor and killed them one by one,making them confess their sins as he was doing it. all the details ı will leave out because they are not for the fainted hearts.

    charles was admitted to an asylum and melanie escaped the house,being "free" now,and lived on the streets till she died of sickness 4 years later.
and that ladies and gentelman is what actually happened at the crane manor. thank you all who participated,specially to our brave guests,who will all rechieve small gifts for their courage. ı hope to see you all at another night with another story. goodnight...
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:01
Kidakakash
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kidakakash wrote:
kirigiri wrote:
and now everyone who has been with us all through the night,the actual story:
  charles was in love with helen. a feeling he thought himself incapable of. that is why he had alot of unapproved affairs,the most scandalous one being with morgan mellon,the daughter of the richest man in town. they had an child from the affair,melanie. since there was no way for morgan to take melanie as her own she left her with charles to either kill or gave up for adoption. the governor alfred thought the child deserved a chance at life while charles thought adoption was too risky and they should just kill her. so they both compramised and hide her in the attic for 8 years. charles told melanie there was a bad man that wanted to kill her to keep her in the aticc.

   annita was looking for a way to blackmail charles, so she went to kubrick for help. together they found the doctor that stayed in charles's manor for a week,with no one supposed to be sick inside. first annita thought this was sodomy,but when they got the doctor talking they learned it was something far bigger. something that could ruin charles forever. so annita wrote a letter for charles which charles buried under a tree.  

   meanwhile charles brought helen home to stay with him,and asked her to be his "maid" to not attract any attention. he asked helen to not go into the attic but helen was curious. but she was also loyal,so instead of going to the attic she started asking about it to anyone she knew. alfred knew if she were to asked the wrong person she could get them all into trouble. so alfred told her about melanie. than he wrote a letter to charles to tell him what happened. because helen was in such a weird mood that charles has started to suspect something was up.
     
  helen first didn't believe him,she needed to see for herself. if there was such a child,she would try to mother the poor soul,growing up in a tiny attic without love! only a private teacher to teach her stuff! to believe the story she needed evidence. so she wrote a letter to miss mellon,telling her she knew about melanie and she would be a great mother to her. miss melon was furious,there was no way a black woman could raise her child. so she not so politely asked helen to get her hands off her child. helen being upset but determined, decided to wait until everyone was asleep. she got some candy from the kitchen and climbed the attic. she was very carefull to not wake anyone up or scare melanie. she got into the attic and even tho she did expect an childs room she still fund it unbelievable. just when she was about to ask for melanie,someone pushed her from the window into her death. the last face she saw was the face of an 8 year old girl...

   when charles found helens body he went straight up to the attic to have melanie hug her and say "ı beat the bad man daddy ı am safe now!" charles hold her daughter,which he did loved dearly and started crying. he blamed annita and kubrick for trying to bring melanie to surface and ruin him,he blamed alfred for telling helen about melanie,he blamed morgan for being such a bitch to helen and a bad mom to melanie. so he invited them all to the manor and killed them one by one,making them confess their sins as he was doing it. all the details ı will leave out because they are not for the fainted hearts.

    charles was admitted to an asylum and melanie escaped the house,being "free" now,and lived on the streets till she died of sickness 4 years later.
and that ladies and gentelman is what actually happened at the crane manor. thank you all who participated,specially to our brave guests,who will all rechieve small gifts for their courage. ı hope to see you all at another night with another story. goodnight...
Great story, I really enjoyed this, maybe it was a little complicated mostly because you had to go back and forth between a lot of text, and I could definitely have used some more hints! But none he less I really enjoyed it! 
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:05
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
allright so for the winner....
ı think both theories are as close but as far
this is probably because ı suck at writing ;___;

ı guess the winner is @Krystle  ! she will get 50cr

but because it was very close ı will also send @kidakakash  some gifts from her wl <3

hope this is allright for you guys

also melanie informed me she wants to give 10cr to all the other players aswell! 
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:07
Kidakakash
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kidakakash wrote:
kirigiri wrote:
allright so for the winner....
ı think both theories are as close but as far
this is probably because ı suck at writing ;___;

ı guess the winner is @Krystle  ! she will get 50cr

but because it was very close ı will also send @kidakakash  some gifts from her wl <3

hope this is allright for you guys

also melanie informed me she wants to give 10cr to all the other players aswell! 
Thank you so much, and thank you to Melanie as well hehe
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:09
Krystle
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Krystle wrote:
oo that was a nice story!
I did think about why Morgan didn't visit Melanie since you mentioned that in one of the answers to the questions we asked but I didn't focus on that.

This was kind of hard because like kidakakash said there was a lot of text to go back and forth between but I definitely enjoyed it too. Thank you for hosting!

And oh I just saw I won so thank you !!! <3
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:09
Kirigiri
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kirigiri wrote:
ah so glad you enjoyed this.
ı will make the game map public so if anyone wants to use this,or improve it you are welcome <3
its in my blogs
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:11
Kidakakash
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kidakakash wrote:
kirigiri wrote:
ah so glad you enjoyed this.
ı will make the game map public so if anyone wants to use this,or improve it you are welcome <3
its in my blogs
Awesome idea, it was super fun! And a little spooky as well 
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:17
Elowyn
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Elowyn wrote:
I loved this idea, great job! @kirigiri 
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Date: 06-08-2018 00:20
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