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Rochellette wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Due to the low amount of entries, the deadline has been extended two days, so you have until midnight on Friday 11th!

omg! thank you

Inspiration abandon me but I'm going to try again today 
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Date: 08-09-2020 21:29
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if this would have been like a writing story comp i would've been shining

but poems HAHA i'm traumatised from school when i had 2 write a poem n it went worse than bad
Date: 08-09-2020 21:33
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Rochellette wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Due to the low amount of entries, the deadline has been extended two days, so you have until midnight on Friday 11th!

omg! thank you

Inspiration abandon me but I'm going to try again today 
Inspiration is sometimes the worst ^^
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Date: 08-09-2020 21:38
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
if this would have been like a writing story comp i would've been shining

but poems HAHA i'm traumatised from school when i had 2 write a poem n it went worse than bad
Ahahaa, hopefully this can help de-traumatise you xD
This is thankfully way less strict than school
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Date: 08-09-2020 21:39
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wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
if this would have been like a writing story comp i would've been shining

but poems HAHA i'm traumatised from school when i had 2 write a poem n it went worse than bad
Ahahaa, hopefully this can help de-traumatise you xD
This is thankfully way less strict than school
haha jhgf idk! i'm not gonna give it a try tho because i have no talent oouff!!
i'm excited 2 see what people come up with tho !
Date: 08-09-2020 21:51
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
if this would have been like a writing story comp i would've been shining

but poems HAHA i'm traumatised from school when i had 2 write a poem n it went worse than bad
Ahahaa, hopefully this can help de-traumatise you xD
This is thankfully way less strict than school
haha jhgf idk! i'm not gonna give it a try tho because i have no talent oouff!!
i'm excited 2 see what people come up with tho !
Nooo, try anyway! One of the main criteria it'll be judged on is the content, not the poem skills
And the only way to get better is by trying
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Date: 08-09-2020 21:54
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wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Ahahaa, hopefully this can help de-traumatise you xD
This is thankfully way less strict than school
haha jhgf idk! i'm not gonna give it a try tho because i have no talent oouff!!
i'm excited 2 see what people come up with tho !
Nooo, try anyway! One of the main criteria it'll be judged on is the content, not the poem skills
And the only way to get better is by trying
my imagination isn't that good esp if shortened down into a poem
i'm thankful 4 the hope u have in me tho ahah ✌️
Date: 08-09-2020 21:55
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
haha jhgf idk! i'm not gonna give it a try tho because i have no talent oouff!!
i'm excited 2 see what people come up with tho !
Nooo, try anyway! One of the main criteria it'll be judged on is the content, not the poem skills
And the only way to get better is by trying
my imagination isn't that good esp if shortened down into a poem
i'm thankful 4 the hope u have in me tho ahah ✌️
You can do it! It doesn't have to be anything fancy haha
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Date: 08-09-2020 21:58
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wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Nooo, try anyway! One of the main criteria it'll be judged on is the content, not the poem skills
And the only way to get better is by trying
my imagination isn't that good esp if shortened down into a poem
i'm thankful 4 the hope u have in me tho ahah ✌️
You can do it! It doesn't have to be anything fancy haha
kjhgfd okay then i might try!
Date: 08-09-2020 22:00
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Rochellette wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Rochellette wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Due to the low amount of entries, the deadline has been extended two days, so you have until midnight on Friday 11th!

omg! thank you

Inspiration abandon me but I'm going to try again today 
Inspiration is sometimes the worst ^^

I know and  the ideas just flow in chaos  with so many things to talk about  Asgard
I need to focus
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Date: 08-09-2020 22:34
Brynhild
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Brynhild wrote:
I tried something. I suck at poetry (trying to put a few rhymes at the beginning and the end of paragraphs ), and it's even more difficult in english because it's not in my native language. I hope it's not that bad  (And I'm not sure I understood what is a stanza )


Deceive the gods for a fortress

Domaine des Ases,
located in the heart of the world
be our loved ones cradle.
Living freely is our latest craze.

May the hearts of the living never freeze,
like the impetuous Ifing River.
Living in Asgard is a sweet sea breeze.

Odin's Hall is so high,
that no human can see the roof.
May his golden shields dazzle us,
as the sun warms souls.
In this new land, all our hope resides.

Hrimthurs and Svadilfari smarter than our gods,
may they inspire us to counter all our sins.
But mischief is not always beneficial,
and divinities are not fooled.
You can't ride roughshod.

A valiant horse is not enough,
to build fortresses.
To conquer without danger,
you triumph without glory.
Carry your burdens proudly,
To prepare your breakthrough.
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Date: 09-09-2020 00:18
TogetherForever
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TogetherForever wrote:
reminder again XD
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Date: 09-09-2020 04:14
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Crawk wrote:
my imagination isn't that good esp if shortened down into a poem
i'm thankful 4 the hope u have in me tho ahah ✌️
You can do it! It doesn't have to be anything fancy haha
kjhgfd okay then i might try!
I'm excited to see what you come up with!
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Date: 09-09-2020 06:57
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Rochellette wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Rochellette wrote:

omg! thank you

Inspiration abandon me but I'm going to try again today 
Inspiration is sometimes the worst ^^

I know and  the ideas just flow in chaos  with so many things to talk about  Asgard
I need to focus
You can do it!
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Posts: 14616
Date: 09-09-2020 06:57
Cimorene
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Cimorene wrote:
Brynhild wrote:
I tried something. I suck at poetry (trying to put a few rhymes at the beginning and the end of paragraphs ), and it's even more difficult in english because it's not in my native language. I hope it's not that bad  (And I'm not sure I understood what is a stanza )
Based on your entry i don't think you suck at it! (and stanzas are just the verses, so there are fie in your poem)
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Date: 09-09-2020 06:58
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