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Escalator: Up it goes

I noticed him first on the escalator.
I think for no particular reason I remembered his face.
Or maybe, looking back, every little detail was pulling at my subconscious to bring it to the surface and to realize what is wrong. But wrapped up in the darkness it slept at the bottom of my mind.
So there I am, walking past all the lights on the streets, chatting away with my friend.
Short on cash, she enters the bank, standing in line for her turn at the ATM.
With surprise I noticed him behind her in line. What a coincidence, I think.
A few moments pass, he goes away.
Click, I'm on alert, my mind wide awake and all the little details are screaming at me, but too late:
his posture, too crouched
the distance, too close
no money withdrawn
Coincidences don't exist.
Hhe kept holding his phone
Too low.
Allie
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*Doorbell rings*.  Cold feet rustle down the stairs trying to keep in the warmth from the wooden floor. The big clock in the hallway continues its switching sounds. All curtains are covering the windows in the small cabin miles from nowhere. Heavy breathing of the person staying there fades when the doorbell rings yet another time. Peeking through the small rounded glass in the door is the only way to reveal the one who disturbed the night.  As the right eye met the dark night behind the glass it became clear that no one was there. Branches from the old dying oak in the front yard had fallen on the ground. The porch looked fairly normal apart from some unusual shoes. Eyes could not gather whose or what kind they were. Door was open. Feet froze additionally as they took a step forward. A look upon the shoes said that the shoes were the ones of a child.
Tiny blue shoes with white laces they were. Hands gathered them and brought them inside. Door was closed yet unlocked. A name was noticed on the sole of the shoes. Eren, it said. The handwriting was familiar.

Don’t you remember who you were, Eren? A voice of a child behind the door asked. *Door
handle wiggled*, and door was opened.
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My Nightmare

I wake in the middle of the night to darkness. After my eyes adjust to the dark room, all I sense is fear creeping. All around me are dark figures, one after the other coming and going. As I try to scream or move to turn on the light from my nightstand, I realize I can't move. I'm paralyzed as the shadows keep moving closer to me. I want to scream so loud for somebody to come and save me. I want to run away as fast as I can but I can't. It's a trap, a nightmare; one that I can't escape from.

• • •

This is based off a nightmare I have often. Thankfully it's only a nightmare but it honestly scares me half to death every time I experience it. :< It's so much worse than I can describe it since I'm not in the mood to go into so much detail ;c
Unterwasserblume
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Class trip

On a schrool trip in class 6 we were on a little farm. On our first night we wasn't sleeping 'cause it was really exciting to be there, so were were up in our rooms and talk. At nine or ten pm we see some lights outside. A few moments later we hear something like a scream and one of us have heard a chainsaw. The other of us don't have heared that but we belived her. We want to go outside to find out from where the light cames, so we go to the other house where the boys sleep and asked them if thex have heard or seen everything. They said there was nothing and we should go back to our rooms. Then we see a person hiding behind a tree and we run back to the house we sleep in and tould it our teacher. 
Years later I'm sure the boys were playing a joke to us, but at that night I were so scared I never was again. 
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OH I´m just struggle so much with copy the text here TT_TT
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"THE REBORN"
By Rochellette

Hope it's ok that I use the prize set for inspiration


At the beginning of times Girl needed a friend
She created me with the purest heart and soul
I was born an angel with a beautiful face
I tried to please her with tea parties and games
But I wasn’t enough and she made a new one,
with long hair and big smile.
She became her favorite and I was left behind,
Forgotten under the bed, alone and dust in my hair.
One lonely night I feel something, a burn from inside,
Some kind of heat was melting my heart
Some kind of fire was blurring my mind
I saw few red drops in my hand
I looked  in the mirror, something was wrong
My skin was warm, soft and was peeling off
So I scratched and pulled my skin off,
From my face, from my body.
A pair of horns grew up,
so big and with the shinier red color I ever saw and
What is in my back?
Huge wings!  I can fly!
I was reborn! A new me, an evil side of me woke up.
I feel powerful now,no more sadness in my heart
I don’t care about tea parties no more
I don’t care about Girl and her friend no more.
I was about to leave in the middle of the night
and left everything behind
but a voice in my head whisper:

“You need to fly and KILL THEM ALL
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I think I finally done yay
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I wrote this poem in the form of a sonnet - sure it's not a perfect sonnet but I hope the rythm is still readable. It's about a constant battle.

My addiction, you are the shining light
I hate the way you flicker and transform,
Invading my mind all through the night,
My thoughts will distort and then deform.

It feels as if my life is  now turning over,
I feel more energized, secure and alive.
Fake sense of ecstasy in October,
Autumn-time has stolen all my drive.

Why I despise you? Let me rethink,
I hate feeling the immense destruction.
My life I've poured into this little drink,
I can't withstand the seduction.

Now I must fight this heartfelt ache,
my conscious mind is what's at stake.
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The girl and the butterknife



She looks at it. The yellow handle and the rusty blade. She can tell just by looking at it that it is going
to take a while. The dull blade is being held against her skin. The flat side
is sliding over her skin giving her goosebumps. It stops. Something is pulling
her hair. She feels a sudden pain on the left side of her neck. She screams. The
dull, rusty blade is cutting through her skin ripping through tendons and
veins. Only stopping to start over. She tries to scream again but only a faint gurgling
can be heard this time. Her eyes widen even more. She realizes this would be
her last moment. The gurgling noises slow down. She knows she can’t do anything
about this. She’s giving up. A silent thumb can be heard when the blade reaches
her spine. Her eyes are blank lost from all emotion. All that pain just a
second ago and now nothing at all. She’s thinking about the people she loved. They
were there in that last painful moment. She was not alone.
A loud cling can be heard. The dull butterknife bounces twice before lying
completely still. Just as the body beside it. 
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Puppetmaster? 

when your a kid Everyone will tell you that you choose your own path, that nobody else can choose your destiny for you, it was like a pretty fairy tale filled to the brim with hope and happiness,  but what when our choices aren't exactly ours to make.

hazily waken up to nothing, the middle of nowhere an utter blackness, an empty space of cold breeze and ( at the time) the scent of what i had thought was, smoke. my fingernails black and my hands bruised and cut. i lay still on the the black space beneath me breathing heavily conscious but conscious at the same time. how was it possible i asked myself, i tried to move but i couldn't mentally tell myself to do it there was a heavy weight in the centre of my body, like if someone were to stand on my chest. i shrieked as i was sure i felt the bones in my body slowly snapping incapacitating me.

a sharp whip of pain wrapped around my brain and a sudden warm went substance trickled down my canvased face, painting it lines fro i wasn't incapable of knowing what i was until suddenly my body uncontrollably started moving on it own, its own free will. what was going on what was happening to me i cried for help but nobody answered, where was i asked myself, well i guess the question i should have been asking was where was everybody else. my body forcing itself to stand up i looked around, unknowing on what to expect. 

as i freeze at the sight of what before i had thought was smoke suddenly my expressionless face turned to complete horror as the sight of burning flesh burned into my mind. and before i had the chance to gather my thoughts, my hands were now covered in blood. a sudden loud repeating banging noise grew louder and louder ... with that the repeated flickering images of myself covered in strings as if i were being used like a puppet. after that i jumped up out of bed gasping for air screaming . calming myself down i lay back down my eyes vigilante. 

now open my eyes wonder into the darkness of my room like once before and from that darkness of my ceiling white strings draped down towards me. i gasped...

blacking out in fear.
Allie
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Ganj wrote:
396 words. Please read the rules and adjust your entry for it to be valid. ^^
Baileyyrosee
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Lily wrote:
Ganj wrote:
396 words. Please read the rules and adjust your entry for it to be valid. ^^
@Ganj 
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