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Azriel wrote:
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I would feel its more natural w it if the first word is the instead of this but idk, it makes no sense as it is now at least
Don't do that tho cus "the....it..." Is a worse sentence than "this....." Tho both seem a bit like stodgy but it might just b the it 
mm it's not my text
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Date: 23-02-2021 11:40
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I mean the 'that' already refers to it ig no?+ so the it feels redundant
I knooo thats what the teacher said as well but idk
nhabhaah aw welL I think teacher is right but I could b wrong.,,,
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Date: 23-02-2021 11:41
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Teacher rite
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without it sounds cleaner

it will refer to "the plastic diet" but since you've already introduced it in that sentence as the subject you don't need to add it again, it clutters 

"that" is basically the extension of your smaller sentence so it's already clear that they belong together
Date: 23-02-2021 11:55 | Times changed: 2
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Azriel wrote:
yes okay thank u every1
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