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Juniper
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Juniper wrote:

Quinzelle wrote:

Juniper wrote:

Quinzelle wrote:
a lot of them are really fun :3
it's also terrifying though because you are constantly showing your work, even when it's the first crappy draft, to your peers and teachers. It's also great to get instant feedback and actually useful criticism rather than "it's good".

Haha, I feel you. I've been just diving headfirst instead and using them xD

I could really use some honest feedback tbh I might take a class next semester if I have a spot open for it

Ikr. Like, I write fanfiction to keep momentum of feedback but it's never the same as proper analytical feedback : (
That'd be awesome!! I wish UK classes worked like that but we only get to pick classes from our degrees : (

Wait it might be like that in the US too... I’ll have to ask my counselor haha hopefully that’s not the case ;u;

Meister
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Meister wrote:

Nesta wrote:

Meister wrote:

MasileinDE wrote:

awwww, I really love hearing this, because it means you never are truly alone in the world with things. But don't get me wrong, I'm an utter sap. Like, omg, I know people give fanfctions a really bad name because there is so much smut and wp out there (and I'm kinda there for that too), but oh my goodness, I could get off to this whole will they won't they and I prefer the whole anticipation of it way more than the actual sex scenes in the end. Like I am a huge fan of big romances and you know, the more mundane parts of it.

Also, that song is amazing, buuuuuuut my heart will always beat for I didn't know I'd love you so much, closely followed by We started this op'ra shit and Let the monster rise (really this whole last part of the movie was soooooooo good, I really love the evolution of Nathan's and Shilo's relationship. Also, huge fan of Sarah Brightman, she really did an amazing job on this one. And I kinda fancy seeing Anthony Stewart Head in this really sombre and dark role. I like Legal Assassin and Night Surgeon because of the depth they give his character.
Have you also seen the Devil's Carnival? I still haven't seen the second part of it, because it's so hard to find a stream and it's not available in Europe (sadly)

One thing i can´t stand in fanfic,s is when they add notes in the writing.
Like this

"Both of them where holding hands and started at the wall ( they are twins and one is mean)"
- Are you coming a girls asked. ( she is like me LOL, clumsy and fab )
Antoher thing is when the use short phrases like
- OMG BRB BAE, WNT 2 EAT LIKE YA KNOW! ( cringe ) i know that my English is not the best but i try to write in a way that everyone understands. And i don´t mind spelling errors since it can happen anyone and if the English is not the mother language it,s harder to be good.

I love horror, psychological horror and ect, im trying to have the smut and adult scenes when they are needed. I want to build up the feelings, tensions and i want to build a scene after the scene. Haha double word. I don´t like fictions with real people like youtubers, actors and so on ( characters are one thing but real people nah)

About the movie, i think it´s the only time Paris Hilton,s acting is good.
I saw the original movie and the musical is wayyyyyy better. The original movie is long, boring and i was so bored.
Hmm i don´t think i have seen that one.

I screamed

On no, why??

TogetherForever
International star

TogetherForever wrote:
I love writing! Especially poems and stories. I like writing stories that rhyme too. C:

Meister
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Meister wrote:

MasileinDE wrote:

Meister wrote:

MasileinDE wrote:

awwww, I really love hearing this, because it means you never are truly alone in the world with things. But don't get me wrong, I'm an utter sap. Like, omg, I know people give fanfctions a really bad name because there is so much smut and wp out there (and I'm kinda there for that too), but oh my goodness, I could get off to this whole will they won't they and I prefer the whole anticipation of it way more than the actual sex scenes in the end. Like I am a huge fan of big romances and you know, the more mundane parts of it.

Also, that song is amazing, buuuuuuut my heart will always beat for I didn't know I'd love you so much, closely followed by We started this op'ra shit and Let the monster rise (really this whole last part of the movie was soooooooo good, I really love the evolution of Nathan's and Shilo's relationship. Also, huge fan of Sarah Brightman, she really did an amazing job on this one. And I kinda fancy seeing Anthony Stewart Head in this really sombre and dark role. I like Legal Assassin and Night Surgeon because of the depth they give his character.
Have you also seen the Devil's Carnival? I still haven't seen the second part of it, because it's so hard to find a stream and it's not available in Europe (sadly)

One thing i can´t stand in fanfic,s is when they add notes in the writing.
Like this

"Both of them where holding hands and started at the wall ( they are twins and one is mean)"
- Are you coming a girls asked. ( she is like me LOL, clumsy and fab )
Antoher thing is when the use short phrases like
- OMG BRB BAE, WNT 2 EAT LIKE YA KNOW! ( cringe ) i know that my English is not the best but i try to write in a way that everyone understands. And i don´t mind spelling errors since it can happen anyone and if the English is not the mother language it,s harder to be good.

I love horror, psychological horror and ect, im trying to have the smut and adult scenes when they are needed. I want to build up the feelings, tensions and i want to build a scene after the scene. Haha double word. I don´t like fictions with real people like youtubers, actors and so on ( characters are one thing but real people nah)

About the movie, i think it´s the only time Paris Hilton,s acting is good.
I saw the original movie and the musical is wayyyyyy better. The original movie is long, boring and i was so bored.
Hmm i don´t think i have seen that one.

omg, yeah, no, that is just shitty writing. Want to add notes? There's the author note function on the top or bottom of the chapter, so I can actually skip it easily if I don't really care this much about your work progress.
yeah, plot and story is also most important for me. I mean, I kinda hate how Netflix makes every show into a soft porn for the views...
also, real life people is a big nono for me and I also keep to the rules of those people who kinda "forbid" fanwork around their creations (eg Anne Rice and the whole Interview with a Vampire spiel)

not just that she actually acted pretty decent, without her the movie never would have made it. She basically gave them all the money in advance, because they had issues getting it greenlighted plus she donated so much from her personal wardrobe for the costumes. hate to say it, but she's the real mvp of the movie.

with original movie, do you mean the Repo Movie or the one with Jude Law? I'm getting a bit confused here

(I'm super tired) because I know the Repo Movie did have a stage version too, but I couldn't find a proper bootleg of it and I'm not from the states, so I wouldn't be able to see it (needless to say, I only found the musical by chance ages after it was sold on DVD), I'm really late to the hype train, like discovered it thanks to my brother thinking he snatched a great splatter movie about 7-8 years ago?

I read a fanfic once that had a note like that said "He and his twin asked how he was. ( twincest)" and i was like "WHUT?" The girl was young but i could not read more after that. There is nothing wrong but she could have wrote "The twins was secret lovers and they only loved each other" Don´t write a story like you write in your personal diary.

Yeah its important to me too, i want to feel draggen in, i want to feel how they feel. I try my best to keep the reader on the toes and then use twist and turns. I want they to laugh, cry and be angry. Now it just sound like im bragging. Im sorry... But it feels good when you write fanfics for your friends and they love the thing they read. They feel that they are in the story and that they are them self and not being better or worse.

Netflix make season 1 good and then it turns in two directions, either only one seasons with no real ending and its a huge cliffhanger. Or the second season is garbage and they change everything and things get unrealistic. I saw a serie that was about viruses and things like that. Loved the first season, in second season it turned into a breeding sect that was brainwashed. That destroyed the whole serie for me.
And we have series that are not that good that gets a third season.
Uhh alot of horror movies is more for the adults, i don´t get why they need hot adult scenes in horror movies. They can ski and have fun in a cabin, not everything is about sex. Its the same thing in the horror movies from the 70 and 80. "Ohh we are camping in a forest and we need to have sex and then get an axe in the head or runaround naked and trip"

Yes, i did not believe that it was Paris when i saw it the first time, she nailed the sole she had. And there are not many that can do something like that. And yes im talking about the one with Jude Law, it was forcing myself to watch the whole movie. When it ended i could go to bed same thing with the Armageddon movie. When it came out everyone said it was the best thing they ever saw. Everyone was hyping it and when i saw it i thought it was to long.

Splatter movies are not my favorite, after i saw the movie Braindead i can´t stand them.

Juniper
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Juniper wrote:

TogetherForever wrote:
I love writing! Especially poems and stories. I like writing stories that rhyme too. C:

Oooh stories that rhyme? That sounds really interesting : D
and what type of stories do you like writing? Fantasy? Romance?

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For Norwegians (or Norwegian-understanding people) there's a free course from Forfatterskolen airing on Sunday that you can sign up to. It's about writing a fantasy novel.

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rip juni

Private
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emogirrrl123 wrote:
1. What do you like to write?
Short stories about my own experiences and people I've met, ofc over-dramatized a lot. Other than that, about taboo subjects and sexuality

2. Is grammar easy or annoying?
Easy, at least in Finnish

3. What’s the longest thing you’ve ever written?
Book I used to work on

4. Do you have a piece of writing you’re particularly proud of?
Yes, but I don't think it's the "best" piece I've ever written. It was just very hard to write

5. What/who inspires you to write?
My own experiences, people I meet/know. If we're friends, it's almost guaranteed I will write something inspired by you at some point

6. What do you like to write with? Phone, laptop, typewriter, pen/paper?
Laptop + pen/paper