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Misjel wrote:
Raquelle wrote:
Misjel wrote:
hshshdgsh, I'm getting sad cause raquelle hair looks not vepee good, nor the skin D-::::

YOU FORGOT TO SHADE THE ARMPITS, and I usually like to shade in blocks in the shape of triangles, usually works. mayyybe outline the fish? we want fishie to pop!!!
Oh no i really loved the design
i think it’s very good ):

 It’s in game already ))): the damage is done 
I need it
I can give you one
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ouch wrote:
Uhhh the pixely thing yes.. n somtimes ur stuff a lil blurry I feel like idk how to explain but its getting lot better lately 
Uh do me, designing mby
Makes sense, I'm not that consistent when designing hahah, is it my skins mostly that are blurry?

1. UPDATE YOUR BLOG
2. Your not-draco-draco skin feels a bit slimey??? Like a newborn baby slimey?  Mby add some extra streaks to your hairs? 
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Raquelle wrote:
Misjel wrote:
Raquelle wrote:
Oh no i really loved the design
i think it’s very good ):

 It’s in game already ))): the damage is done 
I need it
I can give you one
OMG TYYYY
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Heaven wrote:
Misjel wrote:
Heaven wrote:
hmmm since most of ur items are pixely it'd be nice to try a pixely skin like encrede's dollzmania one
I'll def try in the future, I feel like I wont be able to pull it off yet aa

what do we tell mada? Dancedancedance
absolutely, whats your critique, anything is good (not designing... i am 2 drained 2 hear design critique)
You should be on vepee less and study more, show us more dances (-;;;
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Vogue wrote:
Wouldn't go towards the Dollzmania direction, that's it. Like your designs tho.
I'll go in all directions lolol

You intimidate me,, daz it, the critique, for designs.. maybe less contrast? But that's your style, mine are a bit low in contrast so idk cx
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mm ok your skins are super cute but you could be much bolder with the shadows and highlights. overall it's very well shaded, but some single pixels here and there would make a big difference- like one light at the tip of the nose, some very dark with the nostrils and lips n stuff u know what i mean i think, would make the features pop more and the face less flat
sorry for paragraph it could have been worded in half a sentence probably i just don't know how to words

pls do my designing too, but not the colour blandness cuz we figured that one out lol
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Misjel wrote:
ouch wrote:
Uhhh the pixely thing yes.. n somtimes ur stuff a lil blurry I feel like idk how to explain but its getting lot better lately 
Uh do me, designing mby
Makes sense, I'm not that consistent when designing hahah, is it my skins mostly that are blurry?

1. UPDATE YOUR BLOG
2. Your not-draco-draco skin feels a bit slimey??? Like a newborn baby slimey?  Mby add some extra streaks to your hairs? 
No
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askr wrote:
mm ok your skins are super cute but you could be much bolder with the shadows and highlights. overall it's very well shaded, but some single pixels here and there would make a big difference- like one light at the tip of the nose, some very dark with the nostrils and lips n stuff u know what i mean i think, would make the features pop more and the face less flat
sorry for paragraph it could have been worded in half a sentence probably i just don't know how to words

pls do my designing too, but not the colour blandness cuz we figured that one out lol
Thx for the tips!! I do def need to be more bold with my shading and such cx

Hmmmm, I feel like you could try to do shading but less smoothed out? for example the jeans you make look a bit overly smooth, try making jeans with minimal smudge/blur and place blocks of shading. Same thing with hairThis hair is beautifulfulful, but try adding the highlights like this? Like H formed??
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ouch wrote:
Misjel wrote:
ouch wrote:
Uhhh the pixely thing yes.. n somtimes ur stuff a lil blurry I feel like idk how to explain but its getting lot better lately 
Uh do me, designing mby
Makes sense, I'm not that consistent when designing hahah, is it my skins mostly that are blurry?

1. UPDATE YOUR BLOG
2. Your not-draco-draco skin feels a bit slimey??? Like a newborn baby slimey?  Mby add some extra streaks to your hairs? 
No
Wha
Aske
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Misjel wrote:
askr wrote:
mm ok your skins are super cute but you could be much bolder with the shadows and highlights. overall it's very well shaded, but some single pixels here and there would make a big difference- like one light at the tip of the nose, some very dark with the nostrils and lips n stuff u know what i mean i think, would make the features pop more and the face less flat
sorry for paragraph it could have been worded in half a sentence probably i just don't know how to words

pls do my designing too, but not the colour blandness cuz we figured that one out lol
Thx for the tips!! I do def need to be more bold with my shading and such cx

Hmmmm, I feel like you could try to do shading but less smoothed out? for example the jeans you make look a bit overly smooth, try making jeans with minimal smudge/blur and place blocks of shading. Same thing with hairThis hair is beautifulfulful, but try adding the highlights like this? Like H formed??

x
actually i never smudge/blur stuff but agreed it's way too smooth sometimes, especially on the jeans yikes. 

hmm yes i think i get it, i'm kinda hoping i'll never have to make long hair again lmao, tho ig it applies to shorter hairs too thnx for pointing out
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hmmm idk i think the only thing id say is i think ur skins arent saturated enough? like they tilt a little too far into the grey zone for my tastes which is something ive struggled w a lot myself. i think u just might shade with a shade far less saturated than what im used to and thats what throwing me off

ig critique my designs i dont do anything other on this site el o el
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lamb wrote:
hmmm idk i think the only thing id say is i think ur skins arent saturated enough? like they tilt a little too far into the grey zone for my tastes which is something ive struggled w a lot myself. i think u just might shade with a shade far less saturated than what im used to and thats what throwing me off

ig critique my designs i dont do anything other on this site el o el
Yes yes, I noticed recently and I'm trying to do future skins more saturated. Thx for pointing out

Hmm. Your designs are very nice and colorful, the texture is well defined and awesome, did I say no compliments? ehhhh ok.   I feel like your hairs are a bit undefined, may also be a stylistic choice, but perhaps adding some streaks to make it more textured?
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