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idk If I should just have taken this directly @wattpadwriters instead but I'm just soo stuck in my story and idk like I need my motivation back to get it finished. Preferably this summer, you know, but also probably not gonna happen.

Anyways, someone has time to read it?? like it's just a draft and I'm gonna talk it down a lot so u don't have any good thoughts about it b4 u start b\c quite some elements will be edited out when I'm done with the first draft and such... but yeah, if u have the time : )

or just read a piece you know, pick a chapter like the one I'm currently stuck with
anything that helps me think u know

can give some cr as thanks. maybe wl items if I have any.

low key tw since since it is dealing with mentions of mental health issuses

Noir
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Noir wrote:
I can help you. What is the story about? I know its is so frustrating when you get stuck

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animeislive wrote:
I can help you. What is the story about? I know its is so frustrating when you get stuck

Norse mythology : )

Let me gather the old synopsis!

Noir
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Noir wrote:
Uhh interesting. Did you post it on wattpad or not yet?

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Noir wrote:
Also should i know beforehand of norse mythology? because i think i know the basic but i can make a research.

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animeislive wrote:
Uhh interesting. Did you post it on wattpad or not yet?

I had it up for a while. Considering republishing it. I think that would be the easiest way to share it so people can read it... just that no all parts I have are chronological.

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animeislive wrote:
Also should i nlt beforehand of norse mythology? because i think i know the basic but i can make a research.

Well, generally: the everyday life of Norsemen (Vikings)
The goddess Hel, the mythical creature Nattmara (nightmare, mare), the prophecy of Ragnarok. Also, I have some disability rep that I drafted it with and it will probably be removed in the following drafts or at least reduced into a smaller injury since what I drafted it with wasn't a solid concept and it is not being kept properly. It also deals with depression but as said, there's just a draft so not everything comes forth very clear. Mostly working on the happenings you know. Getting in the feelings and all that later. At least that's how I work.

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me throwing my first cliffhanger at chapter five lmao

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Nesta wrote:
me throwing my first cliffhanger at chapter five lmao

and... there came all the bits and pieces

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me, breaking my own heart like- #2
Astrid crawled along the ground. Her nails tore into the earth as if she had claws, which would be absurd because she didn’t. The sound of battle had fallen behind her; Hella’s corpse with it. She didn’t know exactly where she’d gone down, but she had. She had. And now she was here. Alone. Left behind. Alive. She stared at her dagger gleaming in her hand. The sky was dark and cloudy. In the darkness, she followed the sound of rushing water. Anything that would get her out of there.
“Come out little wolf,” someone called behind her. His steps crunched on the ground and a shadow appeared in front of her, grey from the moonlight. She looked down, feeling her energy seep out with the blood running out between her fingers on her stomach. She couldn’t die like this, Astrid knew. Hella had told her she had to die in battle to reach Valhalla, and they only had one chance.She had a feeling Hella had done it. Fear spiked her veins. She didn’t want to be any worse, but… Death for her was more final than Hella viewed it. Dying in the north did mean that her gods wouldn’t claim her or that Hel didn’t override the other powers Hella believed in and claimed Astrid the moment her heart stopped beating.Still, she carried Skofnug by her side. Hella needed her, Astrid reasoned and remembered the rhyme Hella had made for her.
She had her pride left, and she would not die like a pig for slaughter. If she were to be murdered tonight, it was by her own hands, her own actions. She looked down at the blood pooling from her wound. Her head felt heavy, her thoughts clouding over by every breath. She coughed and pain ran through her body, forcing a whimper out of her mouth. It was now or never. Now or in-death – wherever that would be. She took the dagger from her belt, letting the weight sit in her slippery palm for a moment, a silent contemplation. Strange steps shook the earth behind her. She drew her breath before she pierced it deep between her ribs.

Noir
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Noir wrote:
I have a suggestion. I didn´t knew what was the blot, and i search it and it says it is written as blót, I might be wrong, but maybe if you write it like that would be more clear? I dont know just an observation.

I´m still in chapter 1 but I´m loving it, it is really interesting and well written.

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animeislive wrote:
I have a suggestion. I didn´t knew what was the blot, and i search it and it says it is written as blót, I might be wrong, but maybe if you write it like that would be more clear? I dont know just an observation.

I´m still in chapter 1 but I´m loving it, it is really interesting and well written.

I got tired about the spellings after a while lmao
It will all be fixed in the end. It truly just a suffering thing due to it being the first draft.

Thank you <3

Noir
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Nesta wrote:
me, breaking my own heart like- #2
Astrid crawled along the ground. Her nails tore into the earth as if she had claws, which would be absurd because she didn’t. The sound of battle had fallen behind her; Hella’s corpse with it. She didn’t know exactly where she’d gone down, but she had. She had. And now she was here. Alone. Left behind. Alive. She stared at her dagger gleaming in her hand. The sky was dark and cloudy. In the darkness, she followed the sound of rushing water. Anything that would get her out of there.
“Come out little wolf,” someone called behind her. His steps crunched on the ground and a shadow appeared in front of her, grey from the moonlight. She looked down, feeling her energy seep out with the blood running out between her fingers on her stomach. She couldn’t die like this, Astrid knew. Hella had told her she had to die in battle to reach Valhalla, and they only had one chance.She had a feeling Hella had done it. Fear spiked her veins. She didn’t want to be any worse, but… Death for her was more final than Hella viewed it. Dying in the north did mean that her gods wouldn’t claim her or that Hel didn’t override the other powers Hella believed in and claimed Astrid the moment her heart stopped beating.Still, she carried Skofnug by her side. Hella needed her, Astrid reasoned and remembered the rhyme Hella had made for her.
She had her pride left, and she would not die like a pig for slaughter. If she were to be murdered tonight, it was by her own hands, her own actions. She looked down at the blood pooling from her wound. Her head felt heavy, her thoughts clouding over by every breath. She coughed and pain ran through her body, forcing a whimper out of her mouth. It was now or never. Now or in-death – wherever that would be. She took the dagger from her belt, letting the weight sit in her slippery palm for a moment, a silent contemplation. Strange steps shook the earth behind her. She drew her breath before she pierced it deep between her ribs.

OMG I can´t read it, I just spoiled myself lmao.

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animeislive wrote:

Nesta wrote:
me, breaking my own heart like- #2
Astrid crawled along the ground. Her nails tore into the earth as if she had claws, which would be absurd because she didn’t. The sound of battle had fallen behind her; Hella’s corpse with it. She didn’t know exactly where she’d gone down, but she had. She had. And now she was here. Alone. Left behind. Alive. She stared at her dagger gleaming in her hand. The sky was dark and cloudy. In the darkness, she followed the sound of rushing water. Anything that would get her out of there.
“Come out little wolf,” someone called behind her. His steps crunched on the ground and a shadow appeared in front of her, grey from the moonlight. She looked down, feeling her energy seep out with the blood running out between her fingers on her stomach. She couldn’t die like this, Astrid knew. Hella had told her she had to die in battle to reach Valhalla, and they only had one chance.She had a feeling Hella had done it. Fear spiked her veins. She didn’t want to be any worse, but… Death for her was more final than Hella viewed it. Dying in the north did mean that her gods wouldn’t claim her or that Hel didn’t override the other powers Hella believed in and claimed Astrid the moment her heart stopped beating.Still, she carried Skofnug by her side. Hella needed her, Astrid reasoned and remembered the rhyme Hella had made for her.
She had her pride left, and she would not die like a pig for slaughter. If she were to be murdered tonight, it was by her own hands, her own actions. She looked down at the blood pooling from her wound. Her head felt heavy, her thoughts clouding over by every breath. She coughed and pain ran through her body, forcing a whimper out of her mouth. It was now or never. Now or in-death – wherever that would be. She took the dagger from her belt, letting the weight sit in her slippery palm for a moment, a silent contemplation. Strange steps shook the earth behind her. She drew her breath before she pierced it deep between her ribs.

OMG I can´t read it, I just spoiled myself lmao.

yeah don't read the spoilers they aint even in the published parts yet because they are... later on and I still need to fill the middle

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I wanna, I can’t write anything rn I’m so stuck

do u want some feedback/ criticism (ur prob way more skilled than me so I most likely won’t have much to offer tho haha)

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Juniper wrote:
I wanna, I can’t write anything rn I’m so stuck

do u want some feedback/ criticism (ur prob way more skilled than me so I most likely won’t have much to offer tho haha)

I'll send you the link!
Whatever you wanna comment on tbh!