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DaddyIssues wrote:
It's not done but help me see bigger mistakes or ways I can make it better <3

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h0use0fcards wrote:
it definitely needs more dynamic shading, use some darker colors in areas to kind of make it pop out, for example, the skin and the clothing. mess around with the color wheel a bit to see what looks nice
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DaddyIssues wrote:
h0use0fcards wrote:
it definitely needs more dynamic shading, use some darker colors in areas to kind of make it pop out, for example, the skin and the clothing. mess around with the color wheel a bit to see what looks nice
thank you, I'll play some with that ^-^
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Imani wrote:
Idk but it's really cute 
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remains wrote:
i think it would benefit a lot from a definitive light source and shading
we cant see the whole couch thing but perhaps more perspective? especially on the bottom part
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The perspective is pretty weak, but it's interesting as it is so i suggest using a 3D program with a model, then shape the models anatomy to the way u want, put it in perspective and place a proper lightsource like bones said. The 3D program should give u a better idea of the body in perspective overall. I use an app called "magic poser" and it helps me out a LOT with perspectives. 
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DaddyIssues wrote:
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Sofia wrote:
oh wow this is beautiful!!!!!!! 
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Potion wrote:
very cool!
the face is very lively so i would spend time improving the shadows on the body/dress to make it as lively (adding more dark tones and red tones so it isnt as "flat";)
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devilcake wrote:
adding more contrast between light and dark is really helping the updated piece so far! looks lovely :)
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DaddyIssues wrote:
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