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How would u write the sound of a heartbeat?
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Searched a bit, google says thump thump, or lup dub, but nothing feels quiet right. i was thinking "ba-dum" but that reminds u of "badum tch" right. I thought about this for hours i cant make sense of it
Date: 08-10-2020 19:31 | Times changed: 2
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kruspersille wrote:
uuh good questoin
id prolly just say "du-dum" lmaoo
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Date: 08-10-2020 19:33
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d-dm
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emogirrrl123 wrote:
I was thinking of ways to describe it lol
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Date: 08-10-2020 19:34
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emogirrrl123 wrote:
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I was thinking of ways to describe it lol
before I clicked
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Date: 08-10-2020 19:34
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Rotte wrote:
kruspersille wrote:
uuh good questoin
id prolly just say "du-dum" lmaoo
that sound better than my "do donk" lmao
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Date: 08-10-2020 19:37
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Ella wrote:
kruspersille wrote:
uuh good questoin
id prolly just say "du-dum" lmaoo
that sound better than my "do donk" lmao
da donk 
Date: 08-10-2020 19:37
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Raquelle wrote:
tu-tum tu-tum 
in finnish at least i think
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Date: 08-10-2020 19:40
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Raquelle wrote:
tu-tum tu-tum 
in finnish at least i think
sounds fun 
Date: 08-10-2020 19:52
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da-dum da-dum da-dum da-dum
Date: 08-10-2020 19:52
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Nesta wrote:
da-dum da-dum da-dum da-dum
^ it's used in poetry anyways to try to explain the rhythm of a poem and is often described as heartbeats 


thump thump also works imo. i've seen that been used in books many times.
Date: 08-10-2020 19:53 | Times changed: 1
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Nesta wrote:
Nesta wrote:
da-dum da-dum da-dum da-dum
^ it's used in poetry anyways to try to explain the rhythm of a poem and is often described as heartbeats 
Omg thats dope :o See im trying to write something and just writing "his heartbeat increases" again and again is just stupid
Date: 08-10-2020 19:56
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Dinalicious wrote:
Nesta wrote:
Nesta wrote:
da-dum da-dum da-dum da-dum
^ it's used in poetry anyways to try to explain the rhythm of a poem and is often described as heartbeats 
Omg thats dope See im trying to write something and just writing "his heartbeat increases" again and again is just stupid
Yes, but if you're writing it many times consider if you can bring attention to something else instead. First, ask the reason why his heartbeat is increasing, and what are some other bodily sensations that can come with that experience - use them? 
Date: 08-10-2020 20:11
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Nesta wrote:
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Nesta wrote:
^ it's used in poetry anyways to try to explain the rhythm of a poem and is often described as heartbeats 
Omg thats dope See im trying to write something and just writing "his heartbeat increases" again and again is just stupid
Yes, but if you're writing it many times consider if you can bring attention to something else instead. First, ask the reason why his heartbeat is increasing, and what are some other bodily sensations that can come with that experience - use them? 
It's supposed to be used to rise the tension, he keeps hearing a heartbeat but it's not his own and he is slowly being possessed 
Date: 08-10-2020 20:16
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Nesta wrote:
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Omg thats dope See im trying to write something and just writing "his heartbeat increases" again and again is just stupid
Yes, but if you're writing it many times consider if you can bring attention to something else instead. First, ask the reason why his heartbeat is increasing, and what are some other bodily sensations that can come with that experience - use them? 
It's supposed to be used to rise the tension, he keeps hearing a heartbeat but it's not his own and he is slowly being possessed 
ah, then it's a different matter. Well, make sure you don't overuse it tho. You know to the point where the effect of it gets lost or not as impactful as it could have been : )
Date: 08-10-2020 20:20
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Dadum or badum or whatever
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Date: 08-10-2020 20:24
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