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Versailles wrote:
to get a job.
i'm very upset it takes so long, i've been searching since december last year and got 1 job which treatet me bad (working few hours for free and no time to lunchbreak). 

If any norwegians want to read my "åpen søknad" and give me constructive criticism - it's much appreciated. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:11
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Raquelle wrote:
Do you have a cv? And do you write separate job application for each job?
what kinds of jobs have you done
and what kind of job have you applied for
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:13
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wug wrote:
The sentence starting the ultimate paragraph lacks a subject, or agent. It's a relative clause and uhmm yeah.. you need the 1sg pronoun for the sentence to be acceptable. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:14
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wug wrote:
Also without reading it, you start a lot of sentences with "I", try to avoid that to make it flow better when it's read 

Me commenting on language rather than content. 
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Versailles wrote:
Raquelle wrote:
Do you have a cv? And do you write separate job application for each job?
what kinds of jobs have you done
and what kind of job have you applied for
Yup, CV and i've did seperate job application. 
I've worked at cafe and as a guide for a science center before. 

This one is a open-application because i've been trying to search jobs face to face and talk to the CEO and ask questions & give em cv n application and. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:16
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wug wrote:
Actually there's a lot of sentences I would have written differently but it might be acceptable like that, e.g. bare tar vs tar bare. Idk if they entail different meanings but I'd reconsider the word order ngl. 

Also word order on derfor er vs er derfor 

Idk if others agree with me but yeah
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LeleDE wrote:
Oh no sad I'm lucky that I don't have that problem, but I really hope u get s good job soon <3
Don't give up sweety your time will come ❤
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:17
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Versailles wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Actually there's a lot of sentences I would have written differently but it might be acceptable like that, e.g. bare tar vs tar bare. Idk if they entail different meanings but I'd reconsider the word order ngl. 

Also word order on derfor er vs er derfor 

Idk if others agree with me but yeah
ohhh okay idk how to change that tho! Im half russian, so norwegian language isn't my best side. 
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wug wrote:
MossPiglet wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Actually there's a lot of sentences I would have written differently but it might be acceptable like that, e.g. bare tar vs tar bare. Idk if they entail different meanings but I'd reconsider the word order ngl. 

Also word order on derfor er vs er derfor 

Idk if others agree with me but yeah
ohhh okay idk how to change that tho! Im half russian, so norwegian language isn't my best side. 
Aha, interesting. That could explain it yes. 
Hopefully someone can comment on the content, and I can look on the language afterwards if you'd like that? 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:18
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Versailles wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
MossPiglet wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Actually there's a lot of sentences I would have written differently but it might be acceptable like that, e.g. bare tar vs tar bare. Idk if they entail different meanings but I'd reconsider the word order ngl. 

Also word order on derfor er vs er derfor 

Idk if others agree with me but yeah
ohhh okay idk how to change that tho! Im half russian, so norwegian language isn't my best side. 
Aha, interesting. That could explain it yes. 
Hopefully someone can comment on the content, and I can look on the language afterwards if you'd like that? 
I'd like to change it but i'm having a hard time to see what sentence (and why) it's wrong. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:20
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Versailles wrote:
ChubbyBunny wrote:
Oh no I'm lucky that I don't have that problem, but I really hope u get s good job soon <3
Don't give up sweety your time will come ❤
thank you 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:21
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wug wrote:
MossPiglet wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
MossPiglet wrote:
ohhh okay idk how to change that tho! Im half russian, so norwegian language isn't my best side. 
Aha, interesting. That could explain it yes. 
Hopefully someone can comment on the content, and I can look on the language afterwards if you'd like that? 
I'd like to change it but i'm having a hard time to see what sentence (and why) it's wrong. 
My intuitions on those sentences favours a structure like:

"Planlagt videre studie er at jeg bare tar ett fag i høst og (til) våren, og (jeg) er derfor tilgjengelig helg, ukedager og ferie." 

I'd consider adding the things I've put in parenthesis, but I'm unsure whether it's obligatory or not. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:25
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Murillo wrote:
I don't speak norwegian so I just skimmed through that leaning on my limited swedish skills, but I would focus less on your past jobs in the application and maybe just mention them and tell how long you did them, then say that your cv has them explained with more detail. 

Also it would be good to always change the application letter to match the place you're applying for. Keep the open application as the base and just add some details for the companies you're applying for. (so for example mention the company's name in the letter and also write a chapter where you tell exactly what you wish from the company (so just stuff like: "I think _thiscompany_ would help me move forward in my career because I would hopefully get a chance to do _thisandthis_ kind of work, which has interested me for a long time and I would love to develop my skills in those areas) 

Also telling your age in the application is not necessary and I think that in some cases it has the ability to affect the job search negatively. 
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:47
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ouch wrote:
Idk if its just me but its like, written a bit weird sentence structure wise.. i think
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:50
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ouch wrote:
Idk if its just me but its like, written a bit weird sentence structure wise.. i think
Lol idk this was little help its probably not why u haven't gotten a job lmao but have u been searching for spesific job applications (?) Or just giving/sending it to random stores/workplaces ?
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Date: 14-10-2020 17:53
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Versailles wrote:
Murillo wrote:
I don't speak norwegian so I just skimmed through that leaning on my limited swedish skills, but I would focus less on your past jobs in the application and maybe just mention them and tell how long you did them, then say that your cv has them explained with more detail. 

Also it would be good to always change the application letter to match the place you're applying for. Keep the open application as the base and just add some details for the companies you're applying for. (so for example mention the company's name in the letter and also write a chapter where you tell exactly what you wish from the company (so just stuff like: "I think _thiscompany_ would help me move forward in my career because I would hopefully get a chance to do _thisandthis_ kind of work, which has interested me for a long time and I would love to develop my skills in those areas) 

Also telling your age in the application is not necessary and I think that in some cases it has the ability to affect the job search negatively. 

most applications are matching or spesifically to the company. But on here it's easier to share the "open application". 
Didnt know about the age part, thank you! I'mma ask my sister to look over and we can fix together 

Hope im gonna catch something soon!
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