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Xenya wrote:
it's for my essay about domestic abuse 

how can i put this in a better sentence?? i will give u credits for ur help 

'He must make Andrea aware of her human rights to be protected from abuse and make her aware of the different support organisations available so that she may access them when she feels ready. '
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Date: 04-04-2021 02:09
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ouch wrote:
Idk english but

'He must make Andrea aware of her human rights to be protected from abuse, as well as the different support organisations available so that she may access them when she feels ready. '
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Educating Andrea on her basic human rights (regarding abuse,) and making her aware of available support groups that may be useful for her in her future...

i dunno  like what is the point of the sentence? the thing u wanna empathize
Date: 04-04-2021 02:24
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He must bring about Andrea's awareness of her human rights into obtain protected from misdeed, shape her awareness of different support organisations attainable as she feels safe to proceed her journey. 
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ouch wrote:
Thug wrote:

He must bring about Andrea's awareness of her human rights into obtain protected from misdeed, shape her awareness of different support organisations attainable as she feels safe to proceed her journey. 
Me thinking I do not understand a word of this 
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Date: 04-04-2021 02:42
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