Photosynthesis wrote:en.virtualpopstar.com/financial/payingaccountSays: Personalize your forum posts with a personal forum banner and background colour + a personal background to your profile (Too many uses of the word personalize in the same sentence)
Should say: Personalize your forum posts with a forum banner and background colour, as well as a background on your profile
Says: Start a POLL on the forums, your guestbook or blog.
Should say: Start a poll
in the forums, your guestbook or blog
Actually, in the first one, change "colour" (what I wrote) to "color". I realize more people spell it that way