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I'm going to translate the text for my profil
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
*profile now ;-;

wish me luck, I wrote it very strangely on the dutch server hahaha
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Date: 16-08-2014 19:36
XAnna
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xAnna wrote:
hhahaha succes, it's seems really difficult! hahah
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Date: 16-08-2014 19:36
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
xAnna wrote:
hhahaha succes, it's seems really difficult! hahah
I'll see haha but I think I'll be fine :3
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Date: 16-08-2014 19:37
XAnna
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xAnna wrote:
Sachiko wrote:
xAnna wrote:
hhahaha succes, it's seems really difficult! hahah
I'll see haha but I think I'll be fine :3
Yeah, you can do this :]
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Date: 16-08-2014 19:39
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
xAnna wrote:
Sachiko wrote:
xAnna wrote:
hhahaha succes, it's seems really difficult! hahah
I'll see haha but I think I'll be fine :3
Yeah, you can do this :]
The biggest part is done woot
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Date: 16-08-2014 19:50
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
it's done! ^^
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:08
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Greetings dear fellow men. You have arrived on the profile of Miss Sachiko Cryaotic. She is also called Tamara. Lady Cryaotic is sixteen years old and currently in her last year of school. She owns a dog called Noebie who is almost two years old. Miss Sachiko  is from the lovely game/anime/manga Corpse Party, which is maybe known by a couple of you. If you don't know it, you are missing a lot in your life. I recommend you watch it. Next to this text you'll find two game plays, one from Mrs. Sachiko' husband, Cry, and one from miss Sachiko' hero, Minx. Pick one(or both if you want, I won't stop you) and enjoy. Besides Corpse Party, Lady Sachiko likes anime. If you want to know which ones she has seen you should go >here<. Lady also watches youtubers and tv shows. She likes watching her husbands videos, but she also likes watching other people, like Minx, Dlive, Ohmwrecker, Smosh and more. The shows she watches are The Fosters, Pretty Little Liars, Merlin and more. In addition, Lady loves listening to music.such as 5SOS, Ed Sheeran, Bastille, Family of the year and more. Lady is done informing you about herself, but if she has more to say to you, it'll be added.

Goodbye, and remember; We are all mad here...


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I tried to correct the grammar quickly.. lol. It's close enough at this point. You use a lot of "also"
Date: 16-08-2014 20:22
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
Greetings dear fellow men. You have arrived on the profile of Miss Sachiko Cryaotic. She is also called Tamara. Lady Cryaotic is sixteen years old and currently in her last year of school. She owns a dog called Noebie who is almost two years old. Miss Sachiko  is from the lovely game/anime/manga Corpse Party, which is maybe known by a couple of you. If you don't know it, you are missing a lot in your life. I recommend you watch it. Next to this text you'll find two game plays, one from Mrs. Sachiko' husband, Cry, and one from miss Sachiko' hero, Minx. Pick one(or both if you want, I won't stop you) and enjoy. Besides Corpse Party, Lady Sachiko likes anime. If you want to know which ones she has seen you should go >here<. Lady also watches youtubers and tv shows. She likes watching her husbands videos, but she also likes watching other people, like Minx, Dlive, Ohmwrecker, Smosh and more. The shows she watches are The Fosters, Pretty Little Liars, Merlin and more. In addition, Lady loves listening to music.such as 5SOS, Ed Sheeran, Bastille, Family of the year and more. Lady is done informing you about herself, but if she has more to say to you, it'll be added.

Goodbye, and remember; We are all mad here...


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I tried to correct the grammar quickly.. lol. It's close enough at this point. You use a lot of "also"
ah thanks! I was hoping someone would do that ^^ and yeah I do xd
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:27
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In replace of the "also" you could always use "In addition," "However," "Likewise," "Therefore," at the beginning of the sentence and then continue your sentence you were saying. 
Date: 16-08-2014 20:40
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
In replace of the "also" you could always use "In addition," "However," "Likewise," "Therefore," at the beginning of the sentence and then continue your sentence you were saying. 
Thanks ^^
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:41
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Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
In replace of the "also" you could always use "In addition," "However," "Likewise," "Therefore," at the beginning of the sentence and then continue your sentence you were saying. 
Thanks ^^
I did have confusion when it came to whether or not Lady was married.. otherwise, you should have been using Mrs. instead of Miss if this cry guy was her husband. 
Date: 16-08-2014 20:42
XAnna
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xAnna wrote:
Hihihihi so, I have to do that too. Hahaha this is gonna be fun for everybody who can speak English very well xd
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:45
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
In replace of the "also" you could always use "In addition," "However," "Likewise," "Therefore," at the beginning of the sentence and then continue your sentence you were saying. 
Thanks ^^
I did have confusion when it came to whether or not Lady was married.. otherwise, you should have been using Mrs. instead of Miss if this cry guy was her husband. 
haha in the story I made Cry my husband yeah xd
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:46
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
xAnna wrote:
Hihihihi so, I have to do that too. Hahaha this is gonna be fun for everybody who can speak English very well xd
hahaha awhh good luck
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:46
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xAnna wrote:
Hihihihi so, I have to do that too. Hahaha this is gonna be fun for everybody who can speak English very well xd
You should see me try to formulate a bio for my dutch account. Although, your grammar is a lot easier to do it's hard for me to think "I really don't need that extra word there". Where I'm learning dutch it doesn't help me formulate it which is sad. 

Then you might want to switch all the Miss to Mrs. since it shows you are married to someone. 
Date: 16-08-2014 20:47
Sachiko
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Sachiko wrote:
Tezzica wrote:
xAnna wrote:
Hihihihi so, I have to do that too. Hahaha this is gonna be fun for everybody who can speak English very well xd
You should see me try to formulate a bio for my dutch account. Although, your grammar is a lot easier to do it's hard for me to think "I really don't need that extra word there". Where I'm learning dutch it doesn't help me formulate it which is sad. 

Then you might want to switch all the Miss to Mrs. since it shows you are married to someone. 
Haha I am horrible with grammar, I let my friends check everything if I have to do something big xd
Dutch is such an annoying language tho ;-;

ah okay thanks ^^
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Date: 16-08-2014 20:49
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