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Rotte wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Angelica wrote:
Are you judging on grammar and punctuation too or just the story. Because writing have never been my strong suit. 

I haven't prepared voting yet so I am not 100% what factors I will ask people to keep in mind, but definitely mainly just the story itself, whether it hits the ghost-story/ scary story/ mystical, halloween-y feeling, originality etc. Spelling, grammar etc. won't be high on the list but at the same time I don't want it not be be considered at all, you know? Hope my answer helps (': @Angelica 
It does.
I'm just gonna take the chance honestly. Maybe that's gonna be my scary element, how scarily awful it's written. hah
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:09
EventTeam
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EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Angelica wrote:
Are you judging on grammar and punctuation too or just the story. Because writing have never been my strong suit. 

I haven't prepared voting yet so I am not 100% what factors I will ask people to keep in mind, but definitely mainly just the story itself, whether it hits the ghost-story/ scary story/ mystical, halloween-y feeling, originality etc. Spelling, grammar etc. won't be high on the list but at the same time I don't want it not be be considered at all, you know? Hope my answer helps (': @Angelica 
It does.
I'm just gonna take the chance honestly. Maybe that's gonna be my scary element, how scarily awful it's written. hah

Pls bhaahha, am sure you'll be fine!! Hell, no one here is a pro writer, just go for it! & If not, at least there's that participation prize to fall back on heh. Best of luck!!! <3
oh n this is lab btw bhahahhaha
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:18
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Rotte wrote:
EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
Laboratory wrote:

I haven't prepared voting yet so I am not 100% what factors I will ask people to keep in mind, but definitely mainly just the story itself, whether it hits the ghost-story/ scary story/ mystical, halloween-y feeling, originality etc. Spelling, grammar etc. won't be high on the list but at the same time I don't want it not be be considered at all, you know? Hope my answer helps (': @Angelica 
It does.
I'm just gonna take the chance honestly. Maybe that's gonna be my scary element, how scarily awful it's written. hah

Pls bhaahha, am sure you'll be fine!! Hell, no one here is a pro writer, just go for it! & If not, at least there's that participation prize to fall back on heh. Best of luck!!! <3
oh n this is lab btw bhahahhaha
Exactly, that is also the only reason that i am joining, otherwise it would just be extra embarrassing if i didn't win, haha! 
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:20
EventTeam
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EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
It does.
I'm just gonna take the chance honestly. Maybe that's gonna be my scary element, how scarily awful it's written. hah

Pls bhaahha, am sure you'll be fine!! Hell, no one here is a pro writer, just go for it! & If not, at least there's that participation prize to fall back on heh. Best of luck!!! <3
oh n this is lab btw bhahahhaha
Exactly, that is also the only reason that i am joining, otherwise it would just be extra embarrassing if i didn't win, haha! 

yeaH bahahah I getcha can't wait 2 see what u come up with <3
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:23
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Rotte wrote:
EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
EventTeam wrote:

Pls bhaahha, am sure you'll be fine!! Hell, no one here is a pro writer, just go for it! & If not, at least there's that participation prize to fall back on heh. Best of luck!!! <3
oh n this is lab btw bhahahhaha
Exactly, that is also the only reason that i am joining, otherwise it would just be extra embarrassing if i didn't win, haha! 

yeaH bahahah I getcha can't wait 2 see what u come up with <3
I have written it, just gotta grow some balls and post it <3 😳
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:24
EventTeam
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EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
EventTeam wrote:
Angelica wrote:
Exactly, that is also the only reason that i am joining, otherwise it would just be extra embarrassing if i didn't win, haha! 

yeaH bahahah I getcha can't wait 2 see what u come up with <3
I have written it, just gotta grow some balls and post it <3 😳

aW <33333333
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:25
Raflysetiawann
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raflysetiawann wrote:
im bad at writing sad but i will try it soon
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Date: 02-10-2021 16:26
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
raflysetiawann wrote:
im bad at writing but i will try it soon

glad you'll give it a shot heh <3
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Date: 02-10-2021 17:25
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Nanami wrote:
U have to post here? Oh then I wont join bc don't want all on vp to read.
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Date: 02-10-2021 17:59
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Azriel wrote:
It was quiet on the road.
There was no car on the road in the middle of the night, I suppose it made sense. Complete silence, the only noise coming from my rumbling car, which could break down at any moment.
I tried to pay it no attention and turned the radio a little louder.
Another kilometer in complete darkness passed, until there was something in the headlights of my car. It sat still, staring at the approaching vehicle. 
Unmoving.
I brake, hard. As eager as I was to get home, I didn't want to run over a cat. Even if it was a black one.
I wasn't one for superstition, but my grandmother's cat had always sent shivers down my spine, and now so did all the others.
Though, as I brake, my car releases its final breath. Great.
I stare at the cat, still sitting there, licking its paws.
I could have sworn it winked at me as it walked off towards the trees. My eyes land upon a house, hidden behind the trees. That must be where the cat is from.
I get out and follow the cat, as my car broke I have nowhere else to go.
Surprisingly enough, someone actually opens the door when I knock. 
A young woman is standing there, with dark hair and intense green eyes.
"Good evening," she muses. 
Something felt off then. Maybe it was the smell surrounding the house, or her bright eyes, or the venom laced in her voice.
I ignored it and explained my case. She let me in, a smile curling her lip.
I shouldn't have.
Now I can't get out.
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:04
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Azriel wrote:
why do tabs not work on vp, lame
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:05
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Limited wrote:
Nanami wrote:
U have to post here? Oh then I wont join bc don't want all on vp to read.
its a comp, ofc you have to post here, its the same if it was a raffle, dress up comp etc.
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:09
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Rotte wrote:
I look over at Emma, her eyes filled with fear. 
We slowly make our way through the rubble of the old building, trying not to make a sound. We make our way halfway through the big room, when suddenly everything turns black, pitch black. I feel Emma's hand
around my wrist, holding very tight as we stand there, silent.
I feel something soft pass my legs, its tail wrapping around my leg. I want to scream, but I can't,
my heart is pumping.
"Emma..." I whisper, repeating its lightly louder when she doesn't answer, then grip from my wrist loosen. 
I feel myself panic, what is happening?
A touch meets my eyes and I'm startled by the sudden encounter.
"What are you doing here alone? You are not allowed to be here" a woman yells.
Confused I look around me, but Emma is nowhere to be seen. Instead, I see the creature that must have stroke my leg. A black cat, pitch black, straddling over to the door in the light of the woman touch.
I turn my head to the woman and set in a sprint. I don't get far before I tremble on something, I don't register before it's too late, she caught me.
I feel the pain in the back of my head, "Oh, poor Emma" I say silently, then everything goes black.
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:10
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
Nanami wrote:
U have to post here? Oh then I wont join bc don't want all on vp to read.

Yes, in order to join the entry must be posted here. Sorry, I'll consider maybe sending it to the ET account as an option as well for another time)
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:18
XAquamarinex
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xAquamarinex wrote:
I couldn't see. At least not clearly. All I could hear were my footsteps. I couldn't see the moon I so loved to look at while taking my night strolls. I still liked it. I liked to be alone. The darkness, the quietness, being alone at night. Things so many people are scared of.

My thoughts were cut off when suddenly I heard another pair of footsteps behind me. Immediately annoyance filled my body. Carefully I turned my head, just to see who they were. It was dark, but I saw the shadow behind me. Cold shivers went across my body. The shadow of the person was small and slender. Like a child. In her hand was hanging something. A bag? No... It was covered in black fur and it was hanging from It's tail. My annoyance turned into fear and I started to walk faster telling myself that the darkness was just tricking my eyes. After awhile I started to believe it. Then I realized I couldn't hear the footsteps anymore. I stopped and turned my head again to make sure. No one was there.
"Meow"

My body tensed again. There was something on the ground. A cat sitting there and staring at me, I think. It was meowing constantly so I started to walk towards it, concerned that it was hurt. I lowered down and carefully pet it. It stopped meowing and started to purr quietly. I smiled a little. Suddenly the moonlight came behind the clouds, hitting the cats eyes reflecting everything It saw. A smirk. A quick reflection of a light. My terrified face. It was dark. I couldn't see.
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Date: 02-10-2021 18:28
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