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wug wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
tHIS IS what i had to offer lmao, i can't it's so hard
It's been a long time since I did this, so it's probably better to ask Snusmumrikken if it's correct...
@Snusmumrikken 
rate me A-F
C maybe? 
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:38
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Snusmumrikken wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
The old woman with the red hat took a walk *to buy milk at the store.
                 S               ^   ( SC  + red is an adjective? )              V      dO?          ( V + O + AC, preposition phrase place?)     

^ wheres my fucking linking word i don't know what with is yet a preposition? 
* finite verb phrase?

? It's a declarative sentence as it provides information, I assume.
? The old woman is subject with the red hat, and the rest is the predicate that starts with a verb
? Might be  a SV sentence but u know i don't rly know it had so many parts
? Might be transitive but I  can't defend it, i guess one person




Idk if this is basic or not though.
tHIS IS what i had to offer lmao, i can't it's so hard
Oh wow how weird to see analyses like that 

[CP [IP [DP The [AdjP old [NP woman AdjP] [PreP with [DP the [AdjP red [NP hat NP] AdjP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] [vP took [DP a [VPwalk VP] DP] vP] [IP [vP [VP to buy [DP [NP milk [PreP at [DP the [NP store NP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] VP] vP] IP] IP] CP] 
maybe
I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND THAT
Date: 29-08-2020 23:39
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wug wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Nesta wrote:
tHIS IS what i had to offer lmao, i can't it's so hard
Oh wow how weird to see analyses like that 

[CP [IP [DP The [AdjP old [NP woman AdjP] [PreP with [DP the [AdjP red [NP hat NP] AdjP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] [vP took [DP a [VPwalk VP] DP] vP] [IP [vP [VP to buy [DP [NP milk [PreP at [DP the [NP store NP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] VP] vP] IP] IP] CP] 
maybe
This looks like a complete mess, omg.
yeah it looks better with a tree rather than the brackets 
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wug wrote:
Nesta wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Nesta wrote:
tHIS IS what i had to offer lmao, i can't it's so hard
Oh wow how weird to see analyses like that 

[CP [IP [DP The [AdjP old [NP woman AdjP] [PreP with [DP the [AdjP red [NP hat NP] AdjP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] [vP took [DP a [VPwalk VP] DP] vP] [IP [vP [VP to buy [DP [NP milk [PreP at [DP the [NP store NP] DP] PreP] NP] DP] VP] vP] IP] IP] CP] 
maybe
I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND THAT
with time
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:40
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CAN U tell me what they stand for or must i decode this myself
Date: 29-08-2020 23:40
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wug wrote:
Nesta wrote:
CAN U tell me what they stand for or must i decode this myself
at this stage i just do it automatically but i know it's not completely right .. cp is like.. hmm.. idk.. IP is inflected phrase.. I usually use TP (tensed phrase).. idk the difference DP is determiner phrase, NP is noun phrase, AdjP is Adjective Phrase and so on 
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:41
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Snusmumrikken wrote:
Nesta wrote:
CAN U tell me what they stand for or must i decode this myself
at this stage i just do it automatically but i know it's not completely right .. cp is like.. hmm.. idk.. IP is inflected phrase.. I usually use TP (tensed phrase).. idk the difference DP is determiner phrase, NP is noun phrase, AdjP is Adjective Phrase and so on 
i think i did okay 
Date: 29-08-2020 23:42
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this reminded me my teacher yesterday in poetry was like " u r gonna have to write poetry for your essay"
me: oh fuck
Date: 29-08-2020 23:43
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BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
this reminded me my teacher yesterday in poetry was like " u r gonna have to write poetry for your essay"
me: oh fuck
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:44
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BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
this reminded me my teacher yesterday in poetry was like " u r gonna have to write poetry for your essay"
me: oh fuck
me: hehe 
i hope we can pick theme ourselves like maybe i'll just use my old ones and hope they fit
Date: 29-08-2020 23:45
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BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
this reminded me my teacher yesterday in poetry was like " u r gonna have to write poetry for your essay"
me: oh fuck
me: hehe 
i hope we can pick theme ourselves like maybe i'll just use my old ones and hope they fit
I have no idea how to write poetry (except rhymes I guess...) so I would probably have a hard time doing an assignment like that. "Lyrikanalys" in school really destroyed poetry for me.
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:47
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wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
me: hehe 
i hope we can pick theme ourselves like maybe i'll just use my old ones and hope they fit
I have no idea how to write poetry (except rhymes I guess...) so I would probably have a hard time doing an assignment like that. "Lyrikanalys" in school really destroyed poetry for me.
me AABB

once upon a time
I looked at a clock of mine
it was ugly brown
i think it's gonna mold
Date: 29-08-2020 23:48
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wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
me: hehe 
i hope we can pick theme ourselves like maybe i'll just use my old ones and hope they fit
I have no idea how to write poetry (except rhymes I guess...) so I would probably have a hard time doing an assignment like that. "Lyrikanalys" in school really destroyed poetry for me.
me AABB

once upon a time
I looked at a clock of mine
it was ugly brown
i think it's gonna mold
ONce UPon A TIme


no i can't read iambic fuck this i hate it
Date: 29-08-2020 23:50
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wrote:
Snusmumrikken wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
It's been a long time since I did this, so it's probably better to ask Snusmumrikken if it's correct...
@Snusmumrikken 
rate me A-F
C maybe? 
I'LL TAKE IT
Date: 29-08-2020 23:50
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BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
BloomCissi wrote:
Nesta wrote:
me: hehe 
i hope we can pick theme ourselves like maybe i'll just use my old ones and hope they fit
I have no idea how to write poetry (except rhymes I guess...) so I would probably have a hard time doing an assignment like that. "Lyrikanalys" in school really destroyed poetry for me.
me AABB

once upon a time
I looked at a clock of mine
it was ugly brown
i think it's gonna mold
Well...

I think I'm pretty good at rhymes
Since I've done them many times
I think you could say my rhymes were a hit
They even made sense, if you can believe it
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Date: 29-08-2020 23:52
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