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OwlInfestation wrote:
a story on Wattpad and I would appreciate it if you took the time to read it. 

Title: Cassidy Black

Short Description: This is a story written in the first person by Leah Cartwright. 
Leah is a simple highschool girl with a boyfriend. She has had many boyfriends before and is captain of the Cheerleading squad. Everything is going fine until she meets a strange girl, Cassidy Black. Cassidy turns Leah's world upside down, in more ways than one. 

I have only written the first chapter so far and am currently working on the second chapter. 

http://www.wattpad.com/14880092-cassidy-black

Thank you for taking the time to read my writing. I appreciate feedback, positive and negative. 
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OwlInfestation wrote:
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Date: 15-04-2013 23:10
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OwlInfestation wrote:
Oh thank you!
What did you think? 
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Date: 15-04-2013 23:45
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OwlInfestation wrote:
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Date: 18-04-2013 12:16
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Date: 18-04-2013 12:27
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OwlInfestation wrote:
Thanks ^^
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Date: 19-04-2013 10:29
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OwlInfestation wrote:
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Date: 20-04-2013 10:07
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vivica wrote:
hmmmmm it sounds like the many high school stories, but i suppose it has potential
the thing that confused me was when leah was sobbing and then this whole mum conversation came out of nowhere, i had to finish reading the story to understand it was two different people and they weren't even talking to leah
do you get what i mean?
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Date: 20-04-2013 10:43
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OwlInfestation wrote:
vivica wrote:
hmmmmm it sounds like the many high school stories, but i suppose it has potential
the thing that confused me was when leah was sobbing and then this whole mum conversation came out of nowhere, i had to finish reading the story to understand it was two different people and they weren't even talking to leah
do you get what i mean?
It's not going to be like all the other highschool stories. *I*

Yeah, the whole point is that it's from Leah's perspective. 
When you are in a building and two people walk through the doors you don't hear the whole of a conversation. You only hear part of it. That's what I was trying to portray. 
And the point of that was to understand that Cassidy has friends and she isn't just a loner girl that walks around alone.

 Just to help you understand that point of the story, btw. :)
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