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Runaway Love (Story)
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Please tell me what you think about the story that I made up.

   It was 11:27 p.m and I will still awake staring at my blank white ceiling. I was thinking about him. His name was Drake. My mom was "enemies" with his mom. My family and Drake's family aren't allowed to interact with each other because of our moms. It was hard to think about because I loved Drake but we weren't allowed to interact with each other. It was a secret between us two. 

  Few months later.......
I snuck in Drake's house and soon I was in his "secret" room kissing with him. His breath was warm against my face. Then suddenly, we heard a creak. I gasped. The door to the "secret" room was opening! 
"What do I do?!" I asked Drake.
" We're going to get killed!" 
"As long as I'm with you, I'm fine. Let's both get killed then." He said.
It was hard for me not to chuckle a bit. The door opened and his mom looked in. When she saw me, her eyes narrowed. 
"It's you." she said in a icy voice. 
"Get out of my house!" she shouted.
I knew that if she knew that I was with Drake, then my mom would know soon. So I ran down a flight of stairs and rushed out of the door gasping. I heard another pair of feet rush down the stairs too. I was Drake.
"Pack up everything you need in a bag. Pack clothes, and pack food. Got it? Meet me in the park at 11:30 p.m" He said.
He sounded stern so I just nodded. 

  I went home and packed some clothes, a bundle or cash, and some food and stuffed it in my duffle bag. I also brought my cat and dog Chester and Gem. Chester my cat is a boy, and Gem my dog is a girl. It is suprising that they get along very well. I also packed their food too. I was 11:27 p.m and I set out for the park. I got their at exactly 11:30 p.m. He was their waiting for me. I saw that he brought his car too. Get in. he said. So I got in. I put my duffle bag in the seat beside me and put Chester and Gem on my lap. 
"Why did you bring those two?" He asked.

  COMING SOON (Im not finished yet)
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i love it but there's a couple of spelling mistakes like 'I was 11:27'
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i love it but there's a couple of spelling mistakes like 'I was 11:27'

Whoops! Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the comment!
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i love it but there's a couple of spelling mistakes like 'I was 11:27'

Whoops! Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the comment!

it's ok. Will you make some more stories?
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my only problem is I don't like first person stories 
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i love it but there's a couple of spelling mistakes like 'I was 11:27'

Whoops! Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the comment!

it's ok. Will you make some more stories?

Maybe. I never thought about that. Maybe you will help me make the story?
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my only problem is I don't like first person stories 

Ok. Thanks for the comment!
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Whoops! Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the comment!

it's ok. Will you make some more stories?

Maybe. I never thought about that. Maybe you will help me make the story?

yeah ok
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it's ok. Will you make some more stories?

Maybe. I never thought about that. Maybe you will help me make the story?

yeah ok

:)
DJMitch1234
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It's a awesome story! Write some more!    clap   cool
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