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ET: Deadly sins - Vanity [Writing]
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It's time for another deadly sins competition! 
This month, the theme is Vanity

Definition according to the seven deadly sins, Vanity is excessive belief in one's own abilities, that interferes with the individual's recognition of the grace of God. It has been called the sin from which all others arise. 

For this competition, all you have to do is create a poem or story that you think best represents the sin. The writing piece must be your own. If we find out that it has been copied from somewhere else that will result in you getting disqualified. 

You have until Saturday, January 27th at 10PM EST to get your entries in 

There will be a total of 5 female winners and 5 male winners

The winners will receive this beautiful set designed by Nama! 



There are 2 other competitions that you can also enter in for a chance to win! 

Check out the dress up and photography competition! 
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OH FUCK YES THIS IS MY JAM
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Melting wrote:
OH FUCK YES THIS IS MY JAM

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I might actually try this one out this time. 
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Better start typing up!
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any length requirements/restrictions?
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Kikuo wrote:
any length requirements/restrictions?
Nope, but please do keep in mind that we have to read all entries while voting so don't make it too long
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Nama wrote:
Kikuo wrote:
any length requirements/restrictions?
Nope, but please do keep in mind that we have to read all entries while voting so don't make it too long
aight, thanks. 
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:)
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question: am i allowed to enter in more than 1 competition?
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HeyitsKarlee wrote:
question: am i allowed to enter in more than 1 competition?
You may enter them but you can not win the prize more than once :)

(It is also not possible to win the prize for a friend if you were to win twice)
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Nama wrote:
HeyitsKarlee wrote:
question: am i allowed to enter in more than 1 competition?
You may enter them but you can not win the prize more than once

(It is also not possible to win the prize for a friend if you were to win twice)
oh, i wouldn't want to win more than one. i'll definitely be entering though!!
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The Balloon Who Fell 

Once lived a balloon, feeble in size,
Colored in clear that caught nobody’s eyes
Desperate for attention, it wished upon a star
For a grace that would bless it to be noticed from afar
And so it was granted, as the wish was pure:
A helium pump was placed atop cow manure
 
Seeing the pump, the balloon floated with joy
And proceeded to insert it inside like a toy
But was soon interrupted by a very shocked yell—
“Great Jesus! What are you doing?!?!”
—that seemed to come from the pump itself
 
Confused and embarrassed, the balloon backed off
Awkwardly greeting the pump with a cough
While it took long for the pump to recover
Soon it was reciting verses like an elderly mother
 
“You, who wishes for attention, have summoned me.
However be wary, for those who lean to sin
Will bring about their downfall from within.”
 
Not listening at all, the balloon was enthralled
Oh, the thought of being noticed, which used to be bogus!
 
Cut forward a week after the pump had appeared
And the balloon was a spectacle to be loved and revered
Large in size, the balloon was a tree!
The once boring color now reflecting light with glee

Shimmer and sparkle, did the balloon do
While its confidence and pride exponentially grew
 
Soon the balloon was arrogant,
Acting opposite of benevolent
Trashing and attacking other balloons
And labeling everyone else as buffoons

But, oh! The balloon thought itself amazing!
The prettiest of all, worthy of endless praising!
 
Noticing this, the pump switched its air
From helium to burning plants— what a nightmare!
Not noticing change, the balloon refilled with smoke
Then tried to float over and boast to townsfolk
 
But dear, what a failure…
Its color was no longer that of a savior
Stained black by tar and unable hover
Had the balloon truly, truly discovered:
 
“Foolish me, who thought I was greatest,
Was only blessed by whomever that created.
However felled by my sinful behavior,
I will still believe the pump was the traitor!”
 
The pump promptly replied with this:
“Dude, I even warned you.”
And popped the balloon to bits.
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