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ET: Deadly Sins: Envy {Writing}
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EventTeam wrote:
Hello all! We aren't finished with these awesome Deadly Sins Competitions yet!

This month, you guys will be taking inspiration from the sin of: Envy

According to the seven deadly sins, Envy is the desire for others' traits, status, abilities, or situation.

This is one of the competitions that you can participate in. You are allowed to participate in each competition, but you can only win the prize once. You are not allowed to win a second time to give the prize out to a friend. 

For this competition, you have to get inspired by this sin and create a poem that you think best fits the theme. 

The poem has to be your own, if we find out its plagiarized, you will get disqualified.

Post all entries in this forum and please try to keep discussion to a minimum. There will be a discussion forum made that will be linked below. 

Deadline: February 17th, 2018 23:59 EST 
Match your timezone here

There will be a total of 5 female winners and 5 male winners that will win this beautiful prize designed by Wout/Sangster
  
Check out the Dress-up competition here, and the photography competition here.

The discussion thread is here
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Kieren wrote:
Get writing! 
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Date: 05-02-2018 19:22
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Hot diggity dog. 

I best start writing... and hope I don't forget to enter... like the last 3 times :$
Date: 05-02-2018 21:27
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Selcouth wrote:
Fp 
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Date: 06-02-2018 12:58
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Dottis wrote:
My entry:

Behind the fence there are countless treasures
It would be nice to have them with any measures
Neighbour is slimy, they will not share
So if someone took it all would anyone care

The door it won't open to get to the yard
the door it feels rotten but yet so hard
It's not fair that only few can have the key
let others in they also want your stuff free

How can you be so selfish and cruel
your inability to share is flames covered in fuel
No the problem is not in me
It's your fault your valuables is all I see
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Date: 06-02-2018 14:12
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Emo wrote:
(reminder)
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Date: 06-02-2018 14:15
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Fillory wrote:
Inner feelings ends in explosion
Crave of luck and fortune
If only
abilities applied to me
Grotesque love
for traits, I do not bear
Permanent lines
on faces
formed by jealousy
explosion revived
a hundred times
glow flashing 
before eyes
a tear perhaps
for the unowned
climbing ladders through time
success is but a thought
yearning
for what I cannot have
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Date: 07-02-2018 18:01
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Selcouth wrote:
I took a breath and looked around
From the sky till the ground.
I took a mirror and what I see?
Disappointment,I'm not he.
I bought some clothes and walked around
I was happy but deep inside
There were a feeling i can't hide
The spite who brought me down.
I tried again but there's no chance
He is always in advance.

I closed the eyes and I imagined,
How would be if all the things
that he has would be mine?
But this thought seems to have wings
kinda strange,kinda divine
A beauty dream who could never had happened.
I hated him from the start
I hate him from the bottom of my heart.
Why is he and it's not me? 
This is how it's gonna be?

Why is he so appreciated
while I am so underrated?
Why does he has so many things
while I have just sufferings? 
Why is he successful
And i'm just stressful?
Why is he always loved
and I'm just removed?
I took a mirror and i've seen
There is no similarity between.
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Date: 08-02-2018 18:27
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Horcrux wrote:
Hoping to see more entries this time !
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Date: 12-02-2018 14:05
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Aimz wrote:
Mine is a free verse and sorry if it doesn't make sense to you ; - ;



Your perfect smile, your infectious laugher, your gratitude;
A blessing and a virtue.

Your kindness, your thoughtfulness, your happiness;
Endless love within your heart.

My crooked teeth, my obnoxious laughter, my anger;
A curse and a sin.

My bitterness, my greediness, my carelessness;
A black heart that will not heal.

You think it cannot be corrupted or disturbed;
Oh how I wish it all never changed.

I yearn for your happiness, I yearn for your smile.
I want you back because all that you are now is a monster. 

You are me;
But I no longer want to be me, I want to be you. 
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Date: 14-02-2018 20:47
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Sobbing wrote:
I envy you for your carelessness and unlimited joy, 
the way you smile makes me want to destroy,

the way you receive the things you wish for,
makes me boil right down my core,

how the eyes full of admire stare at you, 
I wish you would already fall through,

I wish to be like you,
but that will never make do,

oh it seems like the thing I hold for you is called envy,
and it is said to be deadly,

oh dear but not not for me,
but for you who shall cease to exist in one, two, three...

/I tried my best, I had fun making this so I hope it counts!
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Date: 15-02-2018 05:41
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Those smiles
that stretch for miles.
A laughter 
infectious to all but me.
Such blinding beauty.
Bringing pleasure to others
like it's your duty
Please, won't you share your secret?

You're happy
Carefree
and what am I?
Screaming like a banshee
engulfed in pain
with no hope of gain.
I want to be like you.
Won't you share your secret?
I need it now.
I need it more than you.

You keep it all for yourself.
Bathing in the attention.
Selfish beyond comprehension.
I deserve it too,
So much more.
What's so good,
about you?


- can you tell I still need to practice my poetry xD? 
Date: 16-02-2018 18:49
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I wish i wish with all my heart That I might someday smile I’ve never been Given a reason to be happy I’ve never given it a second thought either...until now, now everything is turning upside down and everyone else is laughing and smiling, everyone else is living and loving a happy life And I hate them for it, the whole world has something I have yet to feel , something that I will never feel, because my heart has been torn to shreds by the low life scums that outcasted me for another over and over and over again.
Date: 16-02-2018 19:18
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Horcrux wrote:
Now that you have read this POST you must enter to avoid being punished (;
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Date: 17-02-2018 01:14 | Times changed: 1
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Cimorene wrote:
Hypoxic wrote:
Now that you have read this most you must enter to avoid being punished (;
Read this most? xD I will enter though, just need to actually write the poem..
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Date: 17-02-2018 01:23 | Times changed: 1
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Horcrux wrote:
Cimorene wrote:
Hypoxic wrote:
Now that you have read this most you must enter to avoid being punished (;
Read this most? xD I wille neter though, just need to actually write the poem..
Wille neter huh ;)
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Date: 17-02-2018 01:24
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