Annie wrote:
Someone throws a rock at the window of an abandoned house and shatters it. A young girl, Addie, standing on the front lawn of this house turns around.)
Bryan : Hey, Troy. You're a dork.
Troy : Hey, shut up. Hey, freak.
(On his way to the front door, Bryan blows some kisses at Addie who stares back at him)
Addie : Excuse me. You are going to die in there.
Troy : Shut your mouth, or we're gonna kick your ass!
Bryan : We got bats.
Troy : I hate trees!
(The boys enter the house)
Addie : You're gonna regret it. You're gonna regret it. You're gonna regret it.
Troy : Yeah!
Bryan : Yeah!
(While the boys smash everything they find inside with their bats, a song sung by children can be heard)
SONG: ♪ I know / I know / You belong / To some / Body new / But tonight / You belong / To me /Although / Although / We're apart / You're part / Of my heart / And tonight / You belong / To me / Just to little old me. ♪
Bryan : Troy.
Troy : Awesome. (A door swings shut) Go.
Bryan : No, you go, shithead.
(The boys go down some stairs)
Troy : Check it out.
(They find a room full of jars filled with human's and animal's parts. Troy picks up a jar containing an ear and drops it. It shatters onto the ground)
Troy : It stinks in here. It stinks like shit. You remember last summer when we get the raccoon stuck in our chimney? That's what it smells like. Let's go find it.
Bryan : No, it smells bad... I'm getting out of here.
(Troy go further into the room, poping his crackers, while Bryan turns around, up the stairs. Suddenly, the popping stops. Bryan stops his ascension)
Bryan : Troy?
(A bottle rolls across floor)
Bryan : Troy? Who's down there? Cut it out, Troy. Cut it out.
(Bryan finds Troy on the ground, his throat slashed. Troy is reaching out to him, unable to utter anything. Bryan turns around and sees a creature, Infantata, running in their direction. Bryan starts screaming. We are suddenly outside the house, Addie is still on the front lawn)
Bryan : Hey, Troy. You're a dork.
Troy : Hey, shut up. Hey, freak.
(On his way to the front door, Bryan blows some kisses at Addie who stares back at him)
Addie : Excuse me. You are going to die in there.
Troy : Shut your mouth, or we're gonna kick your ass!
Bryan : We got bats.
Troy : I hate trees!
(The boys enter the house)
Addie : You're gonna regret it. You're gonna regret it. You're gonna regret it.
Troy : Yeah!
Bryan : Yeah!
(While the boys smash everything they find inside with their bats, a song sung by children can be heard)
SONG: ♪ I know / I know / You belong / To some / Body new / But tonight / You belong / To me /Although / Although / We're apart / You're part / Of my heart / And tonight / You belong / To me / Just to little old me. ♪
Bryan : Troy.
Troy : Awesome. (A door swings shut) Go.
Bryan : No, you go, shithead.
(The boys go down some stairs)
Troy : Check it out.
(They find a room full of jars filled with human's and animal's parts. Troy picks up a jar containing an ear and drops it. It shatters onto the ground)
Troy : It stinks in here. It stinks like shit. You remember last summer when we get the raccoon stuck in our chimney? That's what it smells like. Let's go find it.
Bryan : No, it smells bad... I'm getting out of here.
(Troy go further into the room, poping his crackers, while Bryan turns around, up the stairs. Suddenly, the popping stops. Bryan stops his ascension)
Bryan : Troy?
(A bottle rolls across floor)
Bryan : Troy? Who's down there? Cut it out, Troy. Cut it out.
(Bryan finds Troy on the ground, his throat slashed. Troy is reaching out to him, unable to utter anything. Bryan turns around and sees a creature, Infantata, running in their direction. Bryan starts screaming. We are suddenly outside the house, Addie is still on the front lawn)