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disposable wrote:
Okay, here we go... 

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It's good! You made it come alive, as if it's happening as you read. 
Date: 22-03-2022 20:56 | Times changed: 1
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disposable wrote:
Eostre wrote:
disposable wrote:
Okay, here we go... 

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It's good! You made it come alive, as if it's happening as you read. 
Thank you!!
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Date: 22-03-2022 20:58
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
Noir wrote:
How could you tell it is inspired by the prize design? I feel like mine is more inspired by the name of the designer than the actual design. 
Doesn't have to be super straightforward at all, I am happy you asked, I definitely could've explained better. There could be resemblance in a lot of ways, what I had in my head was things such as textures, the brightness of the design, shapes, maybe a character lost a piece of jewelry etc., feelings - heartbreak, love etc. I tried picking words that worked with the outfit to guide people a little, not to force anyone into a particular direction but mostly to help really. Loose correlation works for me too.

Apologies to Nesta for using her as an example it's just too good not too for this particular question): I think Nesta's poem for instance works great for the task given although she's encouraging her own disqualification (), and chose a route that most probably wouldn't have been lead to - the words are all in & when I read the poem and look at the set I can go "yeah I can see some things" which is just fine to me!

I hope this helped!
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Date: 22-03-2022 21:06
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
You're all doing great guys am so delighted to see some entries lmao, I knew it wouldn't be everyone's fave I mean the writing ones never are it's just been a while since I did one I'M sorry but I love em n I love reading what u guys make even though u all hate it oop
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Date: 22-03-2022 21:09
Noir
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Noir wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Noir wrote:
How could you tell it is inspired by the prize design? I feel like mine is more inspired by the name of the designer than the actual design. 
Doesn't have to be super straightforward at all, I am happy you asked, I definitely could've explained better. There could be resemblance in a lot of ways, what I had in my head was things such as textures, the brightness of the design, shapes, maybe a character lost a piece of jewelry etc., feelings - heartbreak, love etc. I tried picking words that worked with the outfit to guide people a little, not to force anyone into a particular direction but mostly to help really. Loose correlation works for me too.

Apologies to Nesta for using her as an example it's just too good not too for this particular question): I think Nesta's poem for instance works great for the task given although she's encouraging her own disqualification (), and chose a route that most probably wouldn't have been lead to - the words are all in & when I read the poem and look at the set I can go "yeah I can see some things" which is just fine to me!

I hope this helped!
Yes it did. Thank you very much! I re-wrote some parts and i like how it turned out, but i dont think ill post it yet. People's poems are so amazing, i feel i need to work more on it 
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Date: 22-03-2022 21:45
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
Noir wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Noir wrote:
How could you tell it is inspired by the prize design? I feel like mine is more inspired by the name of the designer than the actual design. 
Doesn't have to be super straightforward at all, I am happy you asked, I definitely could've explained better. There could be resemblance in a lot of ways, what I had in my head was things such as textures, the brightness of the design, shapes, maybe a character lost a piece of jewelry etc., feelings - heartbreak, love etc. I tried picking words that worked with the outfit to guide people a little, not to force anyone into a particular direction but mostly to help really. Loose correlation works for me too.

Apologies to Nesta for using her as an example it's just too good not too for this particular question): I think Nesta's poem for instance works great for the task given although she's encouraging her own disqualification (), and chose a route that most probably wouldn't have been lead to - the words are all in & when I read the poem and look at the set I can go "yeah I can see some things" which is just fine to me!

I hope this helped!
Yes it did. Thank you very much! I re-wrote some parts and i like how it turned out, but i dont think ill post it yet. People's poems are so amazing, i feel i need to work more on it 
No worries! Don't know if you've seen but I have also made this change to the front page (should you not want to share it it might be nice):
Addition: I have decided that I am willing to go over poems via private message should anyone feel uncomfortable posting their poem in the thread - write a message titled Poem Entry (or something similar) to the @EventTeam account and I will get back to you as soon as possible. 
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Date: 22-03-2022 21:47
Noir
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Noir wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Noir wrote:
Laboratory wrote:
Doesn't have to be super straightforward at all, I am happy you asked, I definitely could've explained better. There could be resemblance in a lot of ways, what I had in my head was things such as textures, the brightness of the design, shapes, maybe a character lost a piece of jewelry etc., feelings - heartbreak, love etc. I tried picking words that worked with the outfit to guide people a little, not to force anyone into a particular direction but mostly to help really. Loose correlation works for me too.

Apologies to Nesta for using her as an example it's just too good not too for this particular question): I think Nesta's poem for instance works great for the task given although she's encouraging her own disqualification (), and chose a route that most probably wouldn't have been lead to - the words are all in & when I read the poem and look at the set I can go "yeah I can see some things" which is just fine to me!

I hope this helped!
Yes it did. Thank you very much! I re-wrote some parts and i like how it turned out, but i dont think ill post it yet. People's poems are so amazing, i feel i need to work more on it 
No worries! Don't know if you've seen but I have also made this change to the front page (should you not want to share it it might be nice):
Addition: I have decided that I am willing to go over poems via private message should anyone feel uncomfortable posting their poem in the thread - write a message titled Poem Entry (or something similar) to the @EventTeam account and I will get back to you as soon as possible. 
That's really nice. Thank you! 
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Date: 22-03-2022 22:31
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I love how I became an example but literally forgot that part of the requirement so in other words, u can't fail if you try
Date: 22-03-2022 22:33
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
Eostre wrote:
I love how I became an example but literally forgot that part of the requirement so in other words, u can't fail if you try
(': Happens to everyone!
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Date: 22-03-2022 22:36
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Bimbo wrote:
This piece is titled: The Lady of the Lake

"Jewels in her wavy hair
Her singing travels through the air
She helps the forest to awake
For she's the Lady of the lake

Her long pink gown floats in the water
The boy enchanted that he saw her
Look away he never could
From her, the Lady of this wood

She noticed him and called him over
Asking him to be her lover
Enchanted he dove in the water
Drowning for the forest's daughter"


Idk how it's inspired from the set other than her having wavy hair and wearing pink but anyway...
Also I know the poem is nonsense just roll with it
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Date: 22-03-2022 22:54
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Bimbo wrote:
Rhyming is difficult damn
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Date: 22-03-2022 22:56
Laboratory
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Laboratory wrote:
Bimbo wrote:
Rhyming is difficult damn
You did a wonderful job!
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Date: 22-03-2022 23:09
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djinn wrote:
Never before have I seen such cool
with a studded collar and heart jewel
on the outfit with wavy lines and string
just like the swag of the silver bling.

Never before have I seen a heart
dressed up like a peach tart.
The style of the new and the old
come together like a jewel sold.

Never before have I seen such fashion
in a style of such rouge and shiny passion.
Wavy lines and string like silver
match decorated words to deliver.
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Date: 23-03-2022 01:02
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BloomCissi wrote:
A poem inspired by the set you say? Okay...

Poetry is not for the faint at heart
I think that makes a good start
The colour pink
Makes you think
If only I could find the missing link

I put on my jacket and pull up the collar
Surely such an outfit would cost more than a dollar
With my high-heeled shoes
It is difficult to choose
The right accessories to receive enthuse

At last, with my wavy hair and jewel around my neck
I am ready for the discotheque
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Date: 23-03-2022 02:53
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Selcouth wrote:
Fp
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Date: 23-03-2022 08:58
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